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Hi Helen,

I went to Istanbul with mother in low for a week end of November.
We had a really nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed so well, now we are best friends each other
When I back from Antalya I took another a week off for
the study (by the way passed two of my exam and failed one) I think two weeks later I had call from my mum that my brother had a very small accident he has several broken ribs but his ok at the moment etc .
Even now I cant remember how she finished the story I decide go immediately Thanks for My husband and everybody in my office that they really support me that point and let me to go and see him.
When I went there I found out that actually wasn’t accident .After work he was walking to train station about 7'is, some youth group stopped him for lights than grab his bag and ask his money. I think he tried stopped them and they attacked him. He end up in hospital two stabbed wound on his left leg and four broken ribs smashed face.
When I saw him in the hospital I didn’t believe my eyes. He was
looking absolutely awful .My mum and my two sister of course his wife had most awful time. A young guy saw him on street bleeding, he lost a lot blood ,We cloud have lost him .
My mum and my sisters realy need some kind support so I did not want to leave them like that and I decided to stayed with them three weeks
I was back home at Christmas time I did not enjoy Christmas at all I did want to talk any one, I was in such bad mood long time .Fortunately He is doing fine now But it was unforgetable experiences for all of us .
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I went to Istanbul with MY mother in LAW for a weekend IN November.
We had a really nice time there. MY FAMILY AND I did everything we COULD to keep her happy. I believe we managed TO DO SO, AND now we are best OF FRIENDS.
When I GOT back from Antalya I took another a week off
TO study (by the way, I passed two of my examS and failed one) I think two weeks later I GOT A call from my mum that my brother HAD had a very MINOR accident. He has several broken ribs but HE'S ok at the moment etc .
Even now I can't remember how she finished the story. I decideD TO go immediately Thanks TO my husband and everybody in my office WHO REALLY SUPPORTED ME and let me go and see him.
When I went there I found out that actually IT wasn’t AN accident .After work he was walking to THE train station about 7 ISH, some GUYS FROM A youth group stopped him for A light thEn GRABBED his bag and askED FOR ALL HIS money. I think he tried TO stop them and they attacked him. He ENDED up in THE hospital WITH two stab WOUNDS on his left leg, four broken ribs AND A smashed face.
When I saw him in the hospital I COULDN'T believe my eyes. He
LOOKED absolutely awful .My mum, my two sisterS, AND of course his wife had A most awful time. A young guy saw him on THE street bleeding, he HAD lost a lot blood ,We cloud have lost him .
My mum and my sisters REALLY NEEDED some kind OF support so I did not want to leave them like that and I decided to STAY with them FOR three weeks
I was back home at Christmas time BUT I did not enjoy Christmas at all. I did NOT want to talk TO anyone, I was in such A bad mood FOR QUITE A long time .Fortunately He is doing fine now, but it was AN unforgetable experience for US ALL.
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In November, I went to Istanbul with my mother-in-law for a weekend. I had a really nice time there. My family and I did everything we could to keep her happy. I believe we managed to do so, and now she and I are the best of friends.

When I got back from Antalya I took another week off from work to study. (By the way, I passed two of my exams. and failed one of them).

Two weeks later, I think it was, I got a call from my mum that my brother had had a very minor accident. He had broken several ribs, but otherwise he's okay now. Even now, I can't recall the end of my conversation with Mum about the accident. I decided to go and see him immediately, which was made possible by the support of both my husband. as well as everybody in my office, which allowed me to do this.

When I arrived to see my brother I found out that his injuries were not due to an accident. He was walking to the train station at about 7 o'clock when some guys from a youth group stopped him for a light. Then, they grabbed his bag and asked for all his money. I think he tried to stop them and they attacked him. He ended up in the hospital with two stab wounds in his left leg, as well as four broken ribs and a smashed face.

When I saw him in the hospital I couldn't believe my eyes! He looked absolutely awful! My mum and his two sisters, as well, of course, as his wife, had a most awful shock. A young guy had seen him bleeding on the street, and reported it. My brother had evidently lost a lot of blood. We might have lost him, it seems. My mum and my sisters really needed some kind of support, so I decided that instead of leaving them I would stay with them for the following three weeks. I was back home again for Christmas, though. But, I did not enjoy Christmas at all. I did not want to talk to anyone for a long time after I came home, because I was in such a bad mood.

Fortunately, my brother is doing fine now. But, it was an unforgettable experience for us all.

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GuestHi Helen,

I went to Istanbul with mother in law for a week at the end of November.
We had a really nice time there. I and my family did everything we could to keep her happy. I believe we managed so well, now we are best friends each other
When I am back from Antalya i took another week off for
the study (by the way passed two of my exam and failed one) .I think two weeks later i had call from my mum that my brother had a very small accident he has several broken ribs but he is ok at the moment etc .
Even now I can't remember how she finished the story ,so i decided to go immediately .Thanks for my husband and everybody in my office that they really support me at that point and let me to go and see him.
When i went there i found out that actually it wasn’t an accident .After work he was walking to train station about 7'is, some youth group stopped him for lights then grabbed his bag and asked his money. I think he tried to stop them but they attacked him. He endded up in hospital two stabbed a wound on his left leg and four broken ribs on his smashed face.
When I saw him in the hospital I didn’t believe my eyes. He was
looking absolutely awful .My mum and my two sistersof course his wife had most awful time. A young guy saw him on street bleeding, he lost a lot of blood .We could have lost him .
My mum and my sisters really need some kind of support so i did not want to leave them like that ,and I decided to stay with them for three weeks .
I was back home at Christmas time I did not enjoy Christmas at all I did want to talk to any one, I was in a bad mood for a long time .Fortunately He is doing fine now But it was unforgetable experiences for all of us .
I went to Istanbul with my mother-in-law for a weekend in November.
We had really a nice time there. I and my family did everything we cloud to keep her happy. I believe we managed well so now, we are good friends with each other.
When I was back from Antalya, I took another a week off for
the study (by the way, passed two of my exam, and failed one). I think, two weeks later, I had a call from my mom that my brother had a small accident and he had several broken ribs, but his okay at that moment, etc .
Even now, I cant remember how she finished the story. I decided to go immediately. Thanks for my husband and everybody in my office that they really supported me at that point and let me to go to see him.
When I went there I found out that actually it wasn’t an accident .After work, he was walking to the train station, about 7 feets, some youth stopped him for lights, then grabbed his bag and asked his money. I think he tried stop them and they attacked him. He ended up in the hospital with two stabbed wound on his left leg and four broken ribs and smashed face.
When I saw him in the hospital, I didn’t believe my eyes. He was
looking absolutely awful .My mom and my two sisters and of course, his wife had the most awful time. A young guy saw him on street bleeding. He lost a lot of blood. We cloud have lost him .
My mom and my sisters realy needed some kind support so, I did not want to leave them like that and I decided to stay with them for three weeks.
I was back home by Christmas time. I did not enjoy Christmas at all and I did want to talk to any one, I was in such a bad mood for a long time .Fortunately, He is doing fine now, but it is an unforgetable experiences for all of us .
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