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Topic : Some people prefer to live in a small town . Others prefer to live in a big city . Which place would you prefer to live in ? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.


I grew up in a big city with my family when i was a child . So i don’t think that someday i’m going to move in to live in a small town . personally , i like to live in a big city than a small town because we can have the opportunities to get the better job . The entertainment media is also variety and the atmosphere is also vivid than small town . In addition , i can live nearby my family .

The frist reason , when we live in a central city , we have the chance to get the job that we wish . There are several corporations , they choose to locate their companies in large population areas . also , the paycheck is higher than suburb . Because of that reason , we can take that opprtunity to get the better job to improve our life of living .

Secondly , there are a bunch of ways in city to entertain. If we have worked all day long and we want to release stress , we can go to cinema or concert . The atmosphere in city is also energetic than small town . In the evening , on the main street several people take their time with their friends and their families . Therefore , that create lively a city picture .

Thirdly , because i live in city so my relatives are always nearby me . I may visit them more easily and they also can meet me whenever thay want . In addition , when i encounter a problem , it’s really difficult for me to handle by myself . So i think that my family are willing to give a hand to deal with that problem with me when i’m nearby them .

Living in a small town or living in a big city i think that both also have the interesting and their own benefits . but in my opinion i like to live in big city than small town because of easily to get job , variety of entertainment and live nearby my family.

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I grew up in a big city, with my family when i was a child . So i don’t so I do not think that someday i’m I am going to move in to live in a small town. Personally, I like to live in a big city rather than in a small town because we can have the larger cities offer better job opportunities. to get the better job . The entertainment media is options are also variety more diverse and the atmosphere is also more vivid than in a small town. In addition, in a larger town, I can live nearby near my family.

The frist reason , To start with, living in a large city means when we live in a central city , we have the a better chance to of getting the job that we want. wish . There are many businesses in cities, and several corporations , they choose to locate their companies in large-population areas. Also, the pay check is usually higher than in rural or regional areas. suburb . Because of that reason , we can take that opprtunity to get the better job to improve our life of living . [ That is just waffle]

Secondly, there are a bunch of ways in city to plenty of entertainment options and leisure facilities in cities. If we have worked all day long and we want to release stress, we can go to the cinema or a concert. The atmosphere in a big city is also more energetic than in a small town. In the evening, , on the main street several people take their can go out and spend time with their friends and their families . Therefore , that create in a lively large city. picture .

Thirdly, because I live in a large city, so my relatives are always nearby. me . I may visit them more can easily visit them, and they also can meet me whenever they want. In addition, when I encounter a problem, it’s it is reassuring to know really difficult for me to handle by myself . So i think that my family are close and are willing to give a hand to deal with that problem. with me when i’m nearby them .

Living in a small town or living in a big city i think that both also have the interesting and their own benefits . but in my opinion In conclusion, I like to live in a big city rather than in a small town because of easily to get the better job opportunities, the variety of entertainment and live living nearby my family.

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