Could you please help me correct these 5 sentences please?

- LA is as far from NY as NY is from Paris.
- We were starting to get to know one another.
- Eating such a small piece makes you even hugrier./makes you want to eat more.
- Do you know how you know if you've gained weight. Use those jeans as a guide. If you don't fit in them, you've gained.
- It would be much appreciated/greatly appreciated if you helped.
- Do you find it normal that you rent is more than half your paycheck.

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Anyone please help me with these 5 sentences?

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Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.
let me try, hope can help

1. (not so sure what do u mean) LA to Paris is as far as NY to Paris/ LA to NY is as far as to Paris. (similar way as u want to describe the places)

2. we start to get know each other (one another also can, but i feel comfortable with this)

3. eating too little makes you even more hungry.
4 do you know how much weight you've probably gained? Use these (if the jeans are on hands) jeans as a guideline, you will know if the jeans don't fit you.

5. ok
6. do you find it normal that your rent is more than half of your paycheck

i am not expert but hope can help ^^
Can someone tell me what they think of these sentences please?

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