Topic: The maps below show the changes of an island. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay:

The two maps illustrate an island with a beach located in the west and palm trees dotted on the island. The first map is the island before the changes. The second one is the island after its developments toward tourism.

The first map shows a low-lying island with a beach located in the west of the island and some palm trees dotted on the landscape.

The second one shows an island after its tourism developments. Lots of tourism facilties are built on the land. The changes include two blocks of resort built in two circle and three buildings: restaurant, reception, pier. The smaller block of resort including six accommodations are connected with each other by a footpath leading to a swimming zone whereas the bigger one is located in the East. Loacted at the center of the island is a reception connected with a pier lied in the South and a restaurant built in the North by a vehicural track. The pier is a entry gate serving boats. The east end of the island remains unchanged.

Topic: The maps below show the changes of an island. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay:

The two maps illustrate an island with a beach located in on the west end and palm trees growing on it. dotted on the island. The first map is the island before the changes. The second one is the island after it has been developed for its developments toward tourism.

The first map shows a low-lying island with a beach located in the west of the island and some palm trees dotted (Avoid repetition.) on the landscape. (wrong word)

The second one shows an island (Wrong article. This means any island, not necessarily the same one!) after development. its tourism developments. Lots of tourism facilties (spelling) are built on the land. The changes include two blocks of resort (wrong words) built in two circle (wrong form - circles) and three buildings: a restaurant, a reception, and a pier. The smaller block of resort including six accommodations are connected with each other by a footpath leading to a swimming area zone whereas the bigger one is located in the East. Loacted (spelling) at the center of the island is a reception connected with a pier lied (wrong word) in the South and a restaurant built in the North by a vehicural (spelling) track. The pier is a entry gate (wrong words) serving boats. The east end of the island remains unchanged.


Vocabulary:

These are landscapes:




These are blocks:

This is an entry gate: