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a) “In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

b) “Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

c) “Because the internet connection is slow.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

d) “Colin on the other hand decides to take the matter to Jack-the manager when he returns.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

e) “Both companies managed to reduce operating costs because they can find more efficient ways to bring their product to the market.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________________________

f) “Mike recognized that and produces the same model with different features.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

g) “Spectrum Brands are a global consumer products company.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________________________________

h) “My strategies is to manufacture the product.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________

i) “The team members were selected with the desire to absolve itself of blame of any sort.”
Rewrite:________________________________________

j) “Once the project is done, no one will care in the least who said what at a meeting, or the reasons for a decision.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

k) “In order to write well, you need to allow yourself plenty of time to prepare the assignment, proofread carefully and more than once, and using writing reference books.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________

l) “Nortel faced major losses which they wiped out most of the case and reserves of the company.”
Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________

m) “There is a case study telling about in class about a company provided wireless services.”
Rewrite:________________________________________
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Hi
There are a lot of questions here. Surely you can at least try some of them? Just make your best attempt.

Clive
There are some imperfections in the metal castings of this design model
a) "In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings."
Rewrite: There are some imperfections in the metal castings of this design model
b) "Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product."
Rewrite:
The company which is making the product, should have a thorough idea before outsourcing the design
c) "Because the internet connection is slow."
Rewrite :
The internet connection was slow because
d) "Colin on the other hand decides to take the matter to Jack-the manager when he returns."
Rewrite:
Colin had decided to take the matter to Jack-the manager, when he returns.

e) "Both companies managed to reduce operating costs because they can find more efficient ways to bring their product to the market."
Rewrite:__ __
f) "Mike recognized that and produces the same model with different features."
Rewrite:__ _ _
g) "Spectrum Brands are a global consumer products company."
Rewrite:__ ________
h) "My strategies is to manufacture the product."
Rewrite:__ __
i) "The team members were selected with the desire to absolve itself of blame of any sort."
Rewrite:__
j) "Once the project is done, no one will care in the least who said what at a meeting, or the reasons for a decision."
Rewrite:__ _ _
k) "In order to write well, you need to allow yourself plenty of time to prepare the assignment, proofread carefully and more than once, and using writing reference books."
Rewrite:__ __
l) "Nortel faced major losses which they wiped out most of the case and reserves of the company."
Rewrite:__ _ _
m) "There is a case study telling about in class about a company provided wireless services."
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Hi,
OK.
Please clarify what you are trying to do here. Is there some specific way that you are supposed to rewrite these? Are you supposed to be practicing some particular grammar point? Sentences can be rewritten in lots of ways.

Can you add words? Or change words?

In addition, some of the sentences you are supposed to rewrite do not make good or complete sense.

Let's begin by just looking at the first three.

a) “In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings.”
Rewrite:__ _ _

There is no verb in the original so it is an incorrect sentence.

In what way are you supposed to rewrite it? You could rewrite it in lots of ways.

Your answer is There are some imperfections in the metal castings of this design model.

This is OK. You could also say eg 'There were . . ' instead of 'There are. . '.

Or eg The metal castings of this design model showed some imperfections.

b) “Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product.”
Rewrite:__ _ _
This sentence as written makes no real sense.
Again, how are you supposed to rewrite it? Are you supposed to take a sentence that has no meaning and just give it some meaning?

Your answer is The company which is making the product, should have a thorough idea before outsourcing the design This is OK, but remove the comma.

You could also write it in other ways, eg Before outsourcing the design, you should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is going to make the product.

c) “Because the internet connection is slow.”
Rewrite :

Your answer is The internet connection was slow because This is OK.

You could also write eg Because of the slowness of the internet connection
Or eg The reason for the slowness of the internet connection is

So, please clarify what you are trying to do. In what way are you supposed to rewrite these?

Clive