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Hi, today I just wanna practice a bit to improve my English skills.

And today's topic is about heath.

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Heath is the most important thing with every people. If you have lots of money, but you don't have enough heath, and then you can't do anything. Heath is all about your body, your spirit. If you take care of your body, and then your mind will be healthy too. And take care of your body is all about eating habits and exercises. Exercises regularly, eat healthy, vegetables and drink enough water. Avoid fast food. Exercises affect 30% of your body and your mind too. Exercises help you stay in shape, positive mindset cause it reduces stress from outside. If you don't like exercise, you can meditate. It has many benefits: reduces stress, increase happiness, keep in calm. Read books also helps you a lot. It helps you to grow up, think positive and yeah, everything is always in your control. You can't control everything, especially something negative happens in your life, but you can control your response, your react to these things.

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Assanisa

Hi, today I just wanna practice a bit to improve my English skills.

And today's topic is about heath.

..

Heath is the most important thing with every people. If you have lots of money, but you don't have enough heath, and then you can't do anything. Heath is all about your body, your spirit. If you take care of your body, and then your mind will be healthy too. And take care of your body is all about eating habits and exercises. Exercises regularly, eat healthy, vegetables and drink enough water. Avoid fast food. Exercises affect 30% of your body and your mind too. Exercises help you stay in shape, positive mindset cause it reduces stress from outside. If you don't like exercise, you can meditate. It has many benefits: reduces stress, increase happiness, keep in calm. Read books also helps you a lot. It helps you to grow up, think positive and yeah, everything is always in your control. You can't control everything, especially something negative happens in your life, but you can control your response, your react to these things.

You have a lot of errors going on. Please make an effort to fix them and post it again. You probably meant ‘health’ not ‘heath’.

I don't have any mistakes, isn't it?