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Layne Staley was a singer of the Alice in Chains, a famous band of the '90. He is remebered for his powerful voice full of emotions, and a lifetime of excesses living. When he was young, his family had problems due to his father involving drugs and Mafia businesses. This unhappy family life marked him for the rest of his life. Music was a fundamental part of his life, along with the painting. During high school, his problems became more serious until he was forced to be enrolled in a special school for disturbed youth. At that time, he started to write songs and became a singer of his band. The lyrics of his songs in the Alice in Chains, shine all his deep and sad feelings, accompanied with some angry music, it made his band a Grunge movement symbol. Given a life of serious problems, he was an asocial, the only one love of his life,as he said, was Demri Parrot. When she died of a disease, he's closed into his home. He was found dead, sitting on the armchair, two weeks after he died of an overdose.
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Hi Chiachen,
I fixed it for you, as seen below:

Layne Staley was a singer in Alice in Chains, a famous band during the 90's. He is remembered for his powerful voice that was full of emotions, and also for a life of excessive living. When he was young, his family had problems due to his father being involved in the drugs and Mafia businesses. This unhappy family life negatively impacted him for the rest of his life. Music became a fundamental part of his life, along with painting. During high school, his problems became more serious until he was forced to be change schools and be enrolled in a special school for disturbed youth. At that time, he started to write songs and became the lead singer of his band, Alice in Chains. The lyrics of his songs show all his deep and sad feelings, accompanied with angry music; it made his band a symbol of the grunge movement. Due to the serious problems he had, he was an antisocial; he said the only love of his life was Demri Parrot. When she died of illness, he closed himself off from the rest of the world and stayed at home. He was found dead, sitting on the armchair, two weeks after he died of an overdose( overdose of what? Drugs or drinking?)

Hope this is helpful.
--Aina
Thank you for your help. Are you sure there's no typo in this: 'until he was forced to be change schools', also please confirm that we do say "He's an antisocial."
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Sorry, it is a typo, it should read until he was forced to change schools. Also, I think it should read he is antisocial; if you write an antisocial you would need to add an antisocial person.
Thanks for your reply.
It makes more sense to say "Layne Staley was the singer for Alice in chains". While others occasionally contributed their vocals too, he was still the lead singer, right?
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Yes, thank you for the note.