The diagram below show how orange juice is produced

The process describes the manufacture of orange juice. There are 14 main stages in the whole orange juice producing process, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and ending with distributing product to supermarkets.


Firstly, fresh oranges are delivered to factory and they are washed before extraction. Then, solid waste and juice are separated by squeezer, one becomes animal food, the other is mixed with water to make orange juice. In the next stage, orange juice can either be packed to move to supermarket or transferred to another step performed by evaporator machine.


In the evaporation process, the water from fresh orange juice will be removed. Following this, the concentrated juice is canned and then transfer to warehouse. Before packaging, water is added to each can. The entire orange juice producing process concludes after orange juice boxes are delivered to supermarket

The process map illustrates describes the manufacture of orange juice. There are 14 main stages in the whole orange juice producing process, beginning with collecting fresh oranges and ending with distributing product to supermarkets.

(You have missed the major point in this process map. There are two processes shown; one is for fresh orange juice, and the other for orange juice made from concentrate. They have different numbers of steps. )

Firstly, First, fresh oranges are delivered to factory and they are washed before extraction. Then, solid waste and juice are separated by squeezer, (comma splice error) one becomes animal food, the other is mixed with water to make orange juice. In the next stage, orange juice can either be packed to move (wrong verb form) to supermarket or transferred to another step performed by evaporator machine.


In the evaporation process, the water from fresh orange juice will be removed. Following this, the concentrated juice is canned and then transfer (wrong verb form) to warehouse. Before packaging, water is added to each can. The entire orange juice producing process concludes after orange juice boxes are delivered to supermarket

AlpheccaStars First, fresh oranges are delivered to factory and they are washed before...
Excuse me AlpheccaStars. Is the word "factory" correct without any article?

AlpheccaStars

are delivered to supermarket.

Doesn't the word "supermarket" need an article? I think it should be pluralized. Is it right?

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Joseph AExcuse me AlpheccaStars. Is the word "factory" correct without any article?
Joseph ADoesn't the word "supermarket" need an article? I think it should be pluralized. Is it right?

You are correct. They need an article each.

anonymousYou are correct. They need an article each.
Thanks a lot.

sorry but why we can't use "Firstly"? Thanks a lot.

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I have answered this question many times. It is an issue mainly for Vietnamese students. I will make an educated guess that you all are using the same outdated texts.

Read my extensive answer in this post.

FIrstly answer with BJ

This link is in the post, but it has a good discussion. https://www.grammarly.com/blog/firstly/