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hi everyone,

my teacher ordered me to write the advertisement of thailand. so i need your advice and correct it. thank you very much.

Welcome to the kingdom of Thailand. Land of smile.

Thailand is a place that has something for everyone. For those interested in foreign and ancient cultures.

Thailand has islands and beaches defy the destination of heaven on the earth, and we are the one of the world's newest diving destination.

Travelling in Thailand is so easy, convenient, cheap accommodation and a deleicious national cuisine.

All vistors, Thais or foreigns are all treated with courteous manners and sincerity as if they are part of the family.

So come on over and see what Thailand has to offer. The trip to the magical kingdom is not (that) far away.
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A few quick modifications;

Welcome to the Kingdom of Thailand, the land of smiles.

Thailand is a place that has something for everyone, especially those interested in foreign and ancient culture.

Thailand's islands and beaches defy the description 'heaven on the earth', and we are one of the world's newest diving destinations.

Travelling in Thailand is very easy, convenient and inexpensive and you can enjoy cheap accommodation and our delicious cuisine.

All visitors, both Thai and international are treated courteously and sincerely - as if they were part of our family.

So come on over and see what Thailand has to offer. The Magical Kingdom is not very far away.

Cheers
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.. to write ( an ) advertisement of Thailand.

( The Land of smile )

Thailand is a place that has something for everyone especially for those who are interested in foreign and ancient cultures.

( delicious )

Thais or ( foreigners ) .... as if they ( were ) part of the family.

Regarding how to rephrase some sentences, you need the native speakers to help outEmotion: smile
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Dear whl626,

Thank you very much for your advice. Emotion: wink
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dear mike,

thank you very much for your advice... i apperciate you did it. Emotion: wink
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