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Hi! These are the comments for students, but I need an English teacher help me proofread them. If there are any mistakes, pls help me revise them. Thank you very much! (The students will still continue their classes after these comments are pasted into their contact books.) PS. Just let you know the time so that you will know which tenses you should correct with)

1. She understands most words what teacher says and able to speak more English in class.

2. He can use basic English words to combine sentences now. For somehow, he always writes English slower than other students.

3. He always participates with full of passion in any kinds of activities. This is good for him to practice more English.

4. He has been improving his English writing skill.

5. He did well on his quizzes, however, he seems to be afraid of speaking English, because I could barely hear what he said when he tried to talk to me.

6. Her English is as good as usual.

7. A very smart student, however, his mind seems to go nowhere for a few senconds sometimes. (I want to say he day-dreams)

8. A very hard-working student. She has been doing great jobs on her workbook's excercises.

9. Her English speaking skill is quite good. She only needs to write carefully when taking a quiz.

10. She seems a little shy, but she undertsands most words that teachers says.

11. Her English is as good as last symester so far.

12. Her writing skill has been better than I expected. Keep working on that!

13. She has a very kind heart that she always helps other students who have difficulties. She speaks a lot English in class.

14. She always pays attention to the teacher. She has been doing great jobs on her workbook's excercises.
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Hi,

These are the comments for students, but I need an English teacher help me proofread them. If there are any mistakes, pls help me revise them. Thank you very much! (The students will still continue their classes after these comments are pasted into their contact books.) PS. Just let you know the time so that you will know which tenses you should correct with)

Instead of 'the teacher', I would say 'I'.

1. She understands most words that the teacher says, and is able to speak more English in class.

2. He can use basic English words to combine sentences now. However, he writes English more slowly than the other students.

3. He always participates enthusiastically in activities. This allows him to practice more English.

4. He has been improving his English writing skill.

5. He did well on his quizzes. However, he seems to be afraid of speaking English, because I can barely hear what he says when he tries to talk to me.

6. Her English is good, as usual.

7. A very smart student. However, his mind seems to wander a little sometimes.

8. A very hard-working student. She has been doing a great job on her workbook exercises.

9. Her English speaking skill is quite good. She only needs to write carefully when taking a quiz.

10. She seems a little shy, but she understands most words that teachers says.

11. Her English is as good as last semester, so far.

12. Her writing skill has been better than I expected. Keep working on that!

13. She has a very kind heart, and she always helps other students who have difficulties. She speaks a lot of English in class.

14. She always pays attention to the teacher. She has been doing a great job on her workbook exercises.

Clive
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Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much, Tr. Clive!!

Thanks for spending time proofreading them !!!

You're the best!!!!:-)