Topic: Should all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone?
After passing through the Covid-19 pademic, witnessing many vaccines’ charity projects, I wonder if all kinds of vaccines should be made free for everyone or not. To the top of my knowledge, I believe it should be made because of two reasons will be given below.
Firstly, providing enough vaccines for everyone is a humane way of showing love between people with people. Under no circumstance could person’s life be underestimated. Each individual on earth must respect himlife as another people’s lifes. As the result, many non-governmental organizations have established to contribute free vaccines for their kind. For instance, in Vietnam, there has more than 7 kinds of vaccines been injected into children in term of free. During the Covid-19 pademic, Vietnam Goverment launced a directive about taking vaccinations free for whole Vietnamese.
Secondly, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is a humane action which has contributed to human development. In the past, there was a historic pademic called “The black d3eth” that killed up aproximately two hundred millions people. If vaccine did not make compulsory to everyone, even poor people who didn’t have enough money to afford it, a widespread pademic would appear and have badly affected to human. Take Covid-19 affectation on economy, politics and people’s health for example. To prevent the spread of disease as well as hold the world’s improvement result, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is necessary.
In conclusion, these two reasons have given about are the reasons why I believe that providing enough vaccines for everyone is what people should do.
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After passing through the Covid-19 pademic, (wrong spelling) witnessing many vaccines’ charity projects, (wrong phrase. Vaccines do not have projects.) I wonder if all kinds of vaccines should be made free for everyone or not. To the top of my knowledge, (Not a good phrase.) I believe they it should be made because of
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Firstly, First, providing enough vaccines for everyone is a humane way of showing love between people with people. Under no circumstance could any person’s life be underestimated. Each individual on earth must respect himlife (wrong word - invalid ) as another (wrong word) people’s lifes. (wrong spelling) As the result, many non-governmental organizations have established (wrong verb form) to contribute free vaccines for their kind. For instance, in Vietnam, there has (wrong verb form) more than seven 7 kinds of vaccines been injected (wrong verb form) into children in term of free of charge.. During the Covid-19 pademic, (wrong spelling) Vietnam Goverment (wrong spelling) launced (wrong spelling) a directive about taking vaccinations free for whole (wrong word) Vietnamese.
Secondly, Second, all kinds of vaccines be made (wrong spelling) free for everyone is a humane action which has contributed to human development. In the past, there was a historic pademic called “The black d3eth” that killed up aproximately (wrong spelling) two hundred millions (wrong form) people. If vaccine did not make (wrong spelling) compulsory to for everyone, even for poor people who didn’t have enough money to afford it, a widespread pademic would spread and affect many of us. appear and have badly affected to human. (very poor English) Take Covid-19 affectation (wrong word) on economy, politics and people’s health for example. To prevent the spread of disease as well as hold the world’s improvement result, (that does not make sense.) all kinds of vaccines be made (wrong verb form) free for everyone is necessary.
In conclusion, these two reasons have given about (poor English) caring for each other and preventing the harmful effects of a dangerous virus are the reasons why I believe that providing enough vaccines for everyone is what people governments should do.
After passing through the Covid-19 pademic, witnessing many vaccines’ charity projects, I wonder if all kinds of vaccines should be made free for everyone or not. To the top of my knowledge, I believe it should be made because of two reasons will be given below.
Firstly, providing enough vaccines for everyone is a humane way of showing love between people with people. Under no circumstance could person’s life be underestimated. Each individual on earth must respect himlife as another people’s lifes. As the result, many non-governmental organizations have established to contribute free vaccines for their kind. For instance, in Vietnam, there has more than 7 kinds of vaccines been injected into children in term of free. During the Covid-19 pademic, Vietnam Goverment launced a directive about taking vaccinations free for whole Vietnamese.
Secondly, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is a humane action which has contributed to human development. In the past, there was a historic pademic called “The black d3eth” that killed up aproximately two hundred millions people. If vaccine did not make compulsory to everyone, even poor people who didn’t have enough money to afford it, a widespread pademic would appear and have badly affected to human. Take Covid-19 affectation on economy, politics and people’s health for example. To prevent the spread of disease as well as hold the world’s improvement result, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is necessary.
In conclusion, these two reasons have given about are the reasons why I believe that providing enough vaccines for everyone is what people should do.
After passing through the Covid-19 pademic, witnessing many vaccines’ charity projects, I wonder if all kinds of vaccines should be made free for everyone or not. To the top of my knowledge, I believe it should be made because of two reasons will be given below.
Firstly, providing enough vaccines for everyone is a humane way of showing love between people with people. Under no circumstance could person’s life be underestimated. Each individual on earth must respect himlife as another people’s lifes. As the result, many non-governmental organizations have established to contribute free vaccines for their kind. For instance, in Vietnam, there has more than 7 kinds of vaccines been injected into children in term of free. During the Covid-19 pademic, Vietnam Goverment launced a directive about taking vaccinations free for whole Vietnamese.
Secondly, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is a humane action which has contributed to human development. In the past, there was a historic pademic called “The black d3eth” that killed up aproximately two hundred millions people. If vaccine did not make compulsory to everyone, even poor people who didn’t have enough money to afford it, a widespread pademic would appear and have badly affected to human. Take Covid-19 affectation on economy, politics and people’s health for example. To prevent the spread of disease as well as hold the world’s improvement result, all kinds of vaccines be made free for everyone is necessary.
In conclusion, these two reasons have given about are the reasons why I believe that providing enough vaccines for everyone is what people should do.
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