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Topic:What can the art tell us that science can not?

Nowadays the arts and the science, two of the most important factors of human development, make people’s life more colorful by their products. Yet, a few people claim that comparing with the science that can make people’s life more convenient ,the arts is less useful to human’s life. It is obviously that arts can be expressed by a variety of ways such as novels,painting,movie,songs and so on. Therefore, in fact, arts can tell people something that science can not!

No instruments to date have been invented to define people’s emotion , but arts had already achieve such abstract actions century years ago. When novels came out, people felt the abstract emotions as concrete things. For instance , “Gone with the wind”, a famous novel of love story ,tells people that if some one deceived others who loved them he or she would lose true love. There are no machines can illustrate the complicated situation but novels can achieve it easily.

People learn historic culture from arts created by their ancestors. In archaic times, a lot of paintings sculptures and architectures were produced and preserved to date from generation to generation. As science was not advanced those years, no films could be used to record the detailed information. Nevertheless, these excellent arts (paintings sculptures and architectures etc.) show the hope and fashion of temporal people that are researched by scholars nowadays. Therefore, to people who are interested in historic culture,arts are more helpful.

Admittedly, science is necessary in modern society. Nevertheless it's not omnipotent, there are something important that it can’t tell people but arts can.
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William_happyTopic:What can the art tell us that science can not?

Nowadays the arts and the science, two of the most important factors of human development, make people’s life more colorful by their products. Yet, a few people claim that comparing with the science that can make people’s life more convenient ,the arts is less useful to human’s life. It is obviously that arts can be expressed by a variety of ways such as novels,painting,movie,songs and so on. Therefore, in fact, arts can tell people something that science can not!

No instruments to date have been invented to define people’s emotion , but arts had already achieve such abstract actions century years ago. When novels came out, people felt the abstract emotions as concrete things. For instance , “Gone with the wind”, a famous novel of love story ,tells people that if some one deceived others who loved them he or she would lose ___ true love. There are no machines can illustrate the complicated situation but novels can achieve it easily.

People learn historic culture from arts created by their ancestors. In archaic times, a lot of paintings sculptures and architectures were produced and preserved to date from generation to generation. As science was not advanced those years, no films could be used to record the detailed information. Nevertheless, these excellent arts (paintings sculptures and architectures etc.) show the hope and fashion of temporal people that are researched by scholars nowadays. Therefore, to people who are interested in historic culture,arts are more helpful.

Admittedly, science is necessary in modern society. Nevertheless it's not omnipotent, there are something important that it can’t tell people but arts can.