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I try to improve my english writing ability. This is a story like diary I wrote by (or in ?) english. Please help me correct the mistake.

Thanks a lot;

"it's 10:30 pm. I have nothing to do other than listening to music, so write something for fun.

Just in 2 weeks, I'll pass the final-exam before having the Lunar New Year. Unfortunately, the exam starts on Christmas Day, the day my classmates and I are going to do many things like spending one or two sleepless nights.... Emotion: big smile

Writing up to here, there is one friend buzzes me and ask me whether I can help him. He sent me some vietnamese words and told me to translate into english Emotion: smile. That was a love message. I don't know which address he will send to, I'm really curious about that. After that message, He gave me an english sentences I think she replied to him. It's unhappy to him Emotion: sad, mission was unsuccessful...hehe

Though that, he still perseveres, thinked of another letter to reply, and keeps on asking me for translate. This time, he said to me that she have no reply -> wait together for her. A long moment elapsed, still no movement. We continued sending once more message Emotion: big smile to endeavor to get her feedback.

Finally, the thing I got was a line, it makes me go berserk. What I done for a short while was just a jest..........X-( He's so cruel..... Emotion: sad(

Now, look at the clock, it's nearly 0:00 am. Tomorrow, it's Saturday, hope a nice weekend for me and for you also"
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AnonymousI try to improve my English writing ability. This is a story like diary I wrote by (or in ?) English. Please help me correct the mistake.

Thanks a lot;

"It's 10:30 pm. I have nothing to do other than listening to music, so write something for fun.

In just 2 weeks, I'll pass take the final exam before having the Lunar New Year. Unfortunately, the exam starts on Christmas Day, the day my classmates and I intend going to do many things like spending one or two sleepless nights.... Emotion: big smile

Writing up to here, there is one a friend buzzes me and ask me whether I can help him. He sends me some Vietnamese words and told asked me to translate them into English Emotion: smile.It was a love message. I don't know which address he will send to, I'm really curious about that. After that message, he gave me an English sentences that I think she sentto him. It's unhappy to him Emotion: sad, mission was unsuccessful...hehe

Though In spite of/Despite that, he still perseveres, thinked of with another letter in reply, and keeps on asking me to translate. This time, he said to me that she hasn't sent a reply -> wait together for her. A long moment elapsed, still no movement. We continued sending once more messagesend her the message againEmotion: big smile to endeavor to get her feedback.

Finally, the thing I got was a line, it makes me go berserk. What I had done for a short while was just a jest..........X-( He's so cruel..... Emotion: sad(

Now look at the clock, it's nearly 0:00 am. Tomorrow, it's Saturday, hope a nice weekend for me and for you also"
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Thanks so much...... Have a nice weekend [email protected]!
Though In spite of/Despite that, he still perseveres, thinked of with another letter in reply, and keeps on asking me to translate. This time, he said to me that she hasn't sent a reply -> wait together for her. A long moment elapsed, still no movement. We continued sending once more messagesend her the message again to endeavor to get her feedback.

I don't understand why you use in (written in red ink) ? I also don't understand its mean.

And why do you not use asks instead of asking ?

Could you please explain them more detail ? Thank you so much.
Feebs11Though In spite of/Despite that, he still perseveres, thinked of with another letter in reply, and keeps on asking me to translate. This time, he said to me that she hasn't sent a reply -> wait together for her. A long moment elapsed, still no movement. We continued sending once more messagesend her the message again to endeavor to get her feedback.

I don't understand why you use in (written in red ink) ? I also don't understand its mean.

And why do you not use asks instead of asking ?

Could you please explain them more detail ? Thank you so much.
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