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Today, in these natural colors, coming through the opened window, adjusted over the high blue wall; I feel much relaxed -- light as fur, dark clould of stress seems to be fading away.
An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wall, quietly posturing the childhood golden days.

Chek the puntuation as well as points the wrong ones and help me in grammar corrections! PLZZZZZZ
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Cute572 Today, in these natural colors, coming through the opened window, adjusted over the high blue wall; I feel much relaxed -- light as fur, dark clould of stress seems to be fading away.
An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick brown thread over the nail, waged at upper right wall, quietly posturing the childhood golden days.

Chek the puntuation as well as points the wrong ones and help me in grammar corrections! PLZZ
Sorry - they are nonsense Emotion: sad
My paraphrases:
I feel more relaxed with these natural colours coming in through the window, past the high blue wall - the light making the dark cloud of stress fade away.

An oval wooden frame, silver-brown in colour, hung by a thick brown thread from a nail in the upper corner of the right-hand wall, brought back childhood's golden days.
Thanks Feebs!
its ok i know my sentences need much attention. Much attention Emotion: smile
I want to know about my sencond sentence, what if i rephrase it like this:

An oval wooden frame, silver-brown in colour, hung by a thick nilon ribbon over the drilled nail, fixed strongly on my tall wall, postures my childhood light-hearted days.

Would it be a fine sentence?
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It's very wordy, but when you get to the "postures my childhood" it doesn't make sense. Does it remind you of your childhood?
Too many adjectives are making it poor stylistically, we don't care what the ribbon is made of, that the nail was drilled, or that it hangs strongly, or that your wall is tall. 'posturing' is definitely wrong - what meaning are you trying to express?
Hello nona the brit Emotion: smile

But its a decription sentence should we describe this deep every thing ?
well i was trying to say that picture inside the fram remaind or show my childhood time.
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What if i replace "Posturing" with "Capturing" or "Carring", would it points out what i want to say about the frame hung?
Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. It showed [children playing on a beach/a happy group of children playing] and brought back childhood's golden days.
Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. Carries my childhood worry-free days.
Can i write like this because word "brought" make sentence past tense/
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