Hi I'm new on this forum !!

I've written my motivation letter for a one year stage in Brazil. Can someone correct my english and if necessary add some comments.

Thanks from Switzerland

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Dear Sir,

Following your annonce on the website (http://***) for the International Management Trainee, I would like to submit my canditature for this program. This program seems extremely interesting and I feel it would be a challenging experience within a dynamic and well-known international company.

I am graduate at the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology Lausanne (EPFL - Switzerland) with a Master of Science in Mechanical Engineering. My background is very extended as I have taken some multidisciplinary courses in Microengineering and Material Science.

Being a quick learner as well as having a strong interest in the areas of business and project management, which the CVRD's International Management Trainee can offer, it would be a unique international experience with continuous training. I am motivated, with interpersonal and analytical skills.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I send you my best wishes.

Yours sincerely
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It's ok now with these modifications (located between the ***) ?

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Dear Sir,

Following your *** on the website (http://***) for the International Management Trainee, I would like to submit my *** for this program. This program seems extremely interesting and I feel it would be a challenging experience within a dynamic and well-known international company.

I am graduate *** a Master of Science in Mechanical *** obtained at the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology Lausanne (EPFL - Switzerland). My background is very *** as I have taken some multidisciplinary courses in Microengineering and Material Science.

Being a quick learner as well as having a strong interest in the areas of business and project management, which the CVRD's International Management Trainee can offer, it would be a unique international experience with continuous training. I am motivated, with interpersonal and analytical skills.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I send you my best wishes.

Yours sincerely