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Walking

Slowly

A Movement

A Stirring in the Brush

Stop

Listen

A Flash of Gold

Growling

Suspense

Wait

He Jumps

A Lion

Pounces

Out Of The Brush

Attaches

Shaking

Cracking

Arm Is Broken

Guns

Not Dead Yet

Pounces

Falls

A Bullet To The Head

The Men Escape

Alive

Injured

They Survived


Is this poem ok? Do you have any suggestions?

Comments  

It's fine, except did you mean to write "attaches", not "attacks"?