Hi folks, please comment this poem.

Thanks.
Rickfbs.

TIME
Step by Step,
Passes the steps
of well dreamt dreams
in multiple synergies.

Soul made of sun and moon,
Endless stars tune,
Earth and sky,
Nostalgia.
Here is the enchanted chant
with thousands of nuances.

Sensitivity is alive and it vibrates
for shining dimentions.
The tyrant flycatcher goes through
confortable breezes
Yes Happiness.

At dawm the new seduction of the beams gives
birth to the poetress of time and revived lives, inspiring sights.
Very lively and dynamic.
I liked it. Would you like to comment it to us? The images are sometimes too vague for me.Emotion: smile
As far as Maj is concerned, she says this about every poem she reads.