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Could someone please help me word these sentences naturally? Are the correct words used? Are they phrased naturally?


Her mother is preparing her for when she is/gets crowned queen. She doesn’t know how to behave and doesn’t know how to act like a queen.


Her mother is preparing her, teaching her to be a princess, act accordingly and behave as would a princess before she is betroth.


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Her mother is preparing her for when she gets/is (either verb can be used) crowned queen. She doesn't know how to behave/act (either verb can be used) like a queen.


Her mother is preparing her, teaching her to behave as a princess would before she is betrothed.