The following list is presenting in "phrase" pattern. I would be grateful if someone could help me to modify & correct it.



  1. Common fault signal of Heater no.2 to be failed connection with FMCC



  2. Thermal insulation for water tank to be provided



  3. Installation of thermal insulation for feed pipe from water tank to be found incomplete.



  4. A portion size of feed pipe to be found discrepancy in as fitted drawing



  5. Test for water valve to be found outstanding



  6. Paint for electrical conduits at R/F to be found incomplete.



  7. Rectification for loosen hanger support of air duct and cracked waterproofing at R/F to be found outstanding



  8. water pump No.1 and No.2 to be found abnormal noise



  9. Water pressure gauge of water pump No. 2 to be found damage



  10. Flexible conduit connection for water pump to be incomplete



  11. Permanent label and as fitted drawing installation for booster pump to be found outstanding



  12. Flow direction arrow and color band on chilled water pipes to be found outstanding



  13. Clogged coil of split type indoor unit to be cleaned



  14. Permanent installation of remote controller for split type unit to be found incomplete



  15. Roof floor and all plant rooms to be thoroughly cleaned



  16. Outdoor panel for outdoor humidity sensor to be reinstalled and sealed up the holes



  17. Equi-potential earth bonding for metallic components to be provided



  18. Partition wall to be provided in between MCC of electrical side and water side.
Hi,

This is long. Phrases like 'to be found incomplete' are not correct.I think you mean 'found to be incomplete', ie I inspected it and found that it was incomplete.

I'll just mark in red some other parts that I don't understand.

Best wishes, Clive

The following list is presenting in "phrase" pattern. I would be grateful if someone could help me to modify & correct it.



  1. Common fault signal of Heater no.2 to be failed connection with FMCC



  2. Thermal insulation for water tank to be provided



  3. Installation of thermal insulation for feed pipe from water tank to be found incomplete.



  4. A portion size of feed pipe to be found discrepancy in as fitted drawing



  5. Test for water valve to be found outstanding



  6. Paint for electrical conduits at R/F to be found incomplete.



  7. Rectification for loosen hanger support of air duct and cracked waterproofing at R/F to be found outstanding



  8. water pump No.1 and No.2 to be found to abnormal noise to sound abnormal?



  9. Water pressure gauge of water pump No. 2 to be found damaged



  10. Flexible conduit connection for water pump to be incomplete



  11. Permanent label and as fitted drawing installation for booster pump to be found outstanding



  12. Flow direction arrow and color band on chilled water pipes to be found outstanding



  13. Clogged coil of split type indoor unit to be cleaned



  14. Permanent installation of remote controller for split type unit to be found incomplete



  15. Roof floor and all plant rooms to be thoroughly cleaned



  16. Outdoor panel for outdoor humidity sensor to be reinstalled and sealed up the holes and the holes sealed up



  17. Equi-potential earth bonding for metallic components to be provided



  18. Partition wall to be provided in between MCC of electrical side and water side
Thanks

First, i would not like to present in complete sentence, so i adopt "phrase" to present the matter.

common fault signal of heater no.2 is failure to connect to control center. (How to change in "phrase"?)

A part of pipe size is discrepancy with contract drawing.(How to change in "phrase"?)

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I don't understand why the following phrase is wrong comparing with other similiar phrase?

Clogged coil of split type indoor unit to be cleaned (Wrong)

Roof floor and all plant rooms to be thoroughly cleaned (right)
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Hi again,

First, i would not like to present in complete sentence, so i adopt "phrase" to present the matter. Yes, that's fine.

common fault signal of heater no.2 is failure to connect to control center. (How to change in "phrase"?) How about heater no.2 - failure to connect to control center?

A part of pipe size is discrepancy with contract drawing.(How to change in "phrase"?) How about pipe size does not match contract drawing ?

_____________________________________________________________________

I don't understand why the following phrase is wrong comparing with other similiar phrase?

Clogged coil of split type indoor unit to be cleaned (Wrong)When I read it again, it sounds better. Emotion: smile Or you could sayClogging in coil of split type indoor unit.

Best wishes, Clive