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Dear Tanaka-san:
I hope this email finds you doing well.

After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed.
From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years.
I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success of future Sukiyaki total business will also benefits TYP.
I wonder, when did TYP total sales ever increased more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Coefficient chart?

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Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributed to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success of future Sukiyaki total business will also benefits TYP.
I wonder, when did TYP total sales ever increased more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Coefficient chart?
Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success future Sukiyaki total business will also benefit TYP.
I wonder when did TYP total sales ever increase more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Co-efficient chart?

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Dear Tanaka-san,

I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The success future Sukiyaki total business will also benefit TYP.
I wonder when did TYP total sales ever increase more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Co-efficient chart?
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I hope this email finds you doing well. After reading the reward plan proposal, I am deeply disappointed. From this chart, it shows, Kim family totally ignored the efforts which I have been contributing to PBC for the tough Chinese market in the past 10 years. I consider myself as a go-getter type of person. The successful future Sukiyaki total business will also benefit TYP.
I wonder when have TYP total sales ever increased more than 15% in the past year? As TYP's China sales become bigger and bigger, how is it possible to sustain the growth rate on the Coefficient chart?
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