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Life took an unexpect turn. All of of a sudden, Jenny wanted to stop her marriage. She gave no explanation to everyone. When her parents, John and Mary, asked her what made her to withdraw it, she was bursting to tears. Her siblings were wondering what was the mysterious behind. Her mom tried to calm her down and hugged her. Her would-be husband Joe was sitting in the living room, talking to her father. Joe told him that he was infected with some incurable virus. John was listening attentaively, staring at Joe with his wide open eyes. John pushed himself up and restrained his temper. He gave no sympathy to Joe. In John's mind, he was thinking about that Joe was such as a filthy and dishonest man. The mother came out of her daughert's room. She was pale and disappointed. She always said that her daughter and Joe were such a perefect couples. She never questioned his character until now.

Jenny locked her self up, crying all day in her room. It was a shock to her. She couldnot stop thinking what Joe said to her while in the fancy restaurant. It was like the whole world stopped moving in front of her. She recalled that she was trembling when he confessed his disease. He had been wild when he was on his business trip. He laid different woman everyday. It had been like that for over five years. He found out his symptoms when his big body became purple, feeling weak. Then he went to see a doctor, taking a urine test. The docotor told him that he had a lethal disease. As of now, no cure has been found yet. He prescribed him pills to fight the antivirual disease. After hearing all his story, she immeaditely left out the restarunt. Her mind was totally blank. She was thinking his behaviour was so digusting. It couldnot be unforgivable. She was running block to block until she came back her house and closed her bed room door.
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Hi I've marked the mistakes in red for you to sort out and areas where you may wish to re-phrase for style are highlighted in blue. Quite a few carefless spelling mistakes. Also note that could not are two separate words; couldn't is one word.

Life took an unexpect turn. All of of a sudden, Jenny wanted to stop her marriage. She gave no explanation to everyone. When her parents, John and Mary, asked her what made her to withdraw it, she was bursting to tears. Her siblings were wondering what was the mysterious behind. Her mom tried to calm her down and hugged her. Her would-be husband Joe was sitting in the living room, talking to her father. Joe told him that he was infected with some incurable virus. John was listening attentaively, staring at Joe with his wide open eyes. John pushed himself up and restrained his temper. He gave no sympathy to Joe. In John's mind, he was thinking about that Joe was such as a filthy and dishonest man. The mother came out of her daughert's room. She was pale and disappointed. She always said that her daughter and Joe were such a perefect couples. She never questioned his character until now.

Jenny locked her self up, crying all day in her room. It was a shock to her. She couldnot stop thinking what Joe said to her while in the fancy restaurant. It was like the whole world stopped moving in front of her. She recalled that she was trembling when he confessed his disease. He had been wild when he was on his business trip. He laid different woman everyday. It had been like that for over five years. He found out his symptoms when his big body became purple, feeling weak. Then he went to see a doctor, taking a urine test. The docotor told him that he had a lethal disease. As of now, no cure has been found yet. He prescribed him pills to fight the antivirual disease. After hearing all his story, she immeaditely left out the restarunt. Her mind was totally blank. She was thinking his behaviour was so digusting. It couldnot be unforgivable. She was running block to block until she came back her house and closed her bed room door.
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Hi I've marked the mistakes in red for you to sort out and areas where you may wish to re-phrase for style are highlighted in blue. Quite a few carefless spelling mistakes. Also note that could not are two separate words; couldn't is one word.

Life took an unexpect turn. All of of a sudden, Jenny wanted to stop her marriage. She gave no explanation to everyone. When her parents, John and Mary, asked her what made her to withdraw it, she was bursting to tears. Her siblings were wondering what was the mysterious behind. Her mom tried to calm her down and hugged her. Her would-be husband Joe was sitting in the living room, talking to her father. Joe told him that he was infected with some incurable virus. John was listening attentaively, staring at Joe with his wide open eyes. John pushed himself up and restrained his temper. He gave no sympathy to Joe. In John's mind, he was thinking about that Joe was such as a filthy and dishonest man. The mother came out of her daughert's room. She was pale and disappointed. She always said that her daughter and Joe were such a perefect couples. She never questioned his character until now.

Jenny locked her self up, crying all day in her room. It was a shock to her. She couldnot stop thinking what Joe said to her while in the fancy restaurant. It was like the whole world stopped moving in front of her. She recalled that she was trembling when he confessed his disease. He had been wild when he was on his business trip. He laid different woman everyday. It had been like that for over five years. He found out his symptoms when his big body became purple, feeling weak. Then he went to see a doctor, taking a urine test. The docotor told him that he had a lethal disease. As of now, no cure has been found yet. He prescribed him pills to fight the antivirual disease. After hearing all his story, she immeaditely left out the restarunt. Her mind was totally blank. She was thinking his behaviour was so digusting. It couldnot be unforgivable. She was running block to block until she came back her house and closed her bed room door.