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Hi,

I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people, myself included. I would like to move in asap. Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station but it's not a must.

Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay at long term, so it's essential that I like the apartment.

I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis(Manhattan), FY, the compound across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come(1.5 to 2 years or maybe even more), so as of now I'm still searching for the "it" place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!!

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I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people, myself included. I would like to move in asap. Location of the compound isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road since I work at June Int'l building which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station but it's not a must.

Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay at long term, so it's essential that I like the apartment.

I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis(Manhattan), FY, the compound across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come(1.5 to 2 years or maybe even more), so as of now I'm still searching for the "it" place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!!
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Hi,

I'm looking for a two or three bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it will be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station, but it's not a must.

Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay ?at long term?, so it's essential that I like the apartment.

I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis(Manhattan), FY, the Apartment across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them, but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come,(1.5 to 2 years or maybe even more), so as of now I'm still searching for the ?"it"? place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!

Done, please proofread.
That's better, PJ. I've finished it up:

I'm looking for a two- or three-bedroom apartment for two people. I would like to move in as soon as possible. Location of the apartment isn't important but preferably close to Apple Road, since I work at June International Building, which is on the same street. I usually take line 9 to work, so it'll (OK) be more convenient if my home is close to a metro station, but it's not a must

Will there be more options if I wait till after the national holiday is over? I'm not in a rush but want to try to find a comfortable place to stay for the long term, so it's essential that I like the apartment.
I've already visited apartments at Century Metropolis (Manhattan), FY, the apartment across from FY, and various other communities in NYC. I'm interested in a couple of them, but none of them is the ideal apartment I'd like to live in for years to come (2 years or more), so as of now I'm still searching for the (in italics) place to live. Hopefully you'll be able to end this search for me!
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