It is a very old chair which is stood in the same spot since my dad bought it from a furniture store. If anything can give me more memeories, it must be that chair. My life has been attached to that chair. Ever since I was kid, my dream was to become a film director. It was in one saturday night. I sat in that chair that I lost my dream. I began to realize that I lacked something to become a director or screenwriter or producer sitting in that chair. It was terrible when I thought that I could not make it. The first kiss I got from a girl was sitting in that chair. I discovered what was love, passion, sex, like sitting in that chair. I commited myself to get more laid sitting in that chair. I remebered I was watching tv sitting in that chair. Then one of my hot temper girlfriends came to me and gave me a big slap. Then she pulled my body out of the chair and her long nails really hurted me. It was in that chair that I decided to go college and to spend four more years chasing girls at campus. It turned out a very good thing for me going to college. I thought I would just work for my dad at his auto shop to make a living. Away for college, I didnt sit in that chair anymore. My mom knew I was a sentimentlist type. She put it away somewhere until I came back home.
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It is a very old chair which ____ stood in the same spot since my dad bought it from a furniture store. If there is anything that brings me back old memeories, it must be that chair. My life has been attached to that chair. Ever since I was kid, my dream was to become a film director. It was in one saturday night ____ I sat in that chair that I lost my dream. I began to realize that I lacked something that helps me become a director or screenwriter or producer (delete). It was terrible when I thought that I could not make it. The first kiss I got from a girl was when __ __ sitting in that chair. I discovered what was love, passion, sex, like sitting in that chair (delete). I commited myself to ___ ____ (are you sure that's what you want to say?)sitting in that chair. I remebered (sp.) I was watching tv sitting in that chair. Then one of my hot temper (changed this to an adj.) girlfriends came to me and gave me a big slap. Then she pulled my body out of the chair and her long nails really hurted me. It was in that chair that I decided to go __ college and to spend four more years chasing girls __ campus. It turned out a very good thing for me _ _ to college. I thought I would just work for my dad at his auto shop to make a living. Away for college, I didnt sit in that chair anymore. My mom knew I was a sentimentlist type. She put it away somewhere until I came back home.
It is a very old chair which WAS stood in the same spot since my dad bought it from a furniture store. If there is anything that brings me back old memeories, it must be that chair. My life has been attached to that chair. Ever since I was A kid, my dream was to become a film director. It was in one saturday night WHEN I sat in that chair that I lost my dream. I began to realize that I lacked something that helps me become a director or screenwriter or producer. It was terrible when I thought that I could not make it. The first kiss I got from a girl was when I WAS sitting in that chair. I discovered what was love, passion, and sex. I commited myself to HAVING MORE LUST. I remember that I was watching tv sitting in that chair when one of my hottemper girlfriends came to me and gave me a big slap. Then she pulled my body out of the chair and her long nails really hurt me. It was in that chair that I decided to go to college and to spend four more years chasing girls on campus. It turned out a very good thing for me to go to college. I thought I would just work for my dad at his auto shop to make a living. Away for college, I didn't sit in that chair anymore. My mom knew I was a sentimentlist type. She put it away somewhere until I came back home.

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