When I went to a barbershop today, I wanted my hair cut only. As I immediately entered the door, someone welcomed me. I told her exactly what I wanted: short. She did not speak my dialect so we did not talk much. After my hair was cut, she wanted my hair wash. I was thinking she just washed away the falling hair yet she washed the whole thing. Then the barber had my mustache and beard shaved. It came to my mind there might be someone used the razor before. I really resented having them shaved. Minutes later she began to message my face. When the message was over, I sat back at the seat. She was beginning to clean my ears. I really hated it when she did that. I wished I had told her to stop. I was worried the stick that she used it for many times. As soon as she dried my hair, she gave me body message.

It was hard to conceive woman sometimes. I really did not know why the young doctor had a crash on me. I knew the moment when she started to interesting me when I went out to have my hair cut. I did not want to wait in the clinic for a long time.When I was walking in elevator, I saw her standing at the corner looking at me. As I went back to the clinic, the nurse called me immediately. She took me into a small room. I was waiting for the young doctor. She was examining me very carefully. She began to talk too much. I saw her cheek red, nose roughed, and her lip reds. She wanted me to come back in three months. When I was walking out the clinic, I saw the old doctor was jealous. It seemed to me he was kind of hostile.

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When I went to a barbershop today, I wanted my hair cut only. As soon as I entered the door, someone welcomed me. I told her exactly what I wanted: short. She did not speak my dialect so we did not talk much. After my hair was cut, she wanted to wash my hair. I was thinking she would just wash away the falling hair yet she washed the whole thing. Then the barber shaved my mustache and beard. It came to my mind there someone might have used the razor before. I really resented having them shave me. Minutes later she began to massage my face. When the massage was over, I sat back in the seat. She was beginning to clean my ears. I really hated it when she did that. I wished I had told her to stop. I was worried that she had used the stick for it for many times. As soon as she dried my hair, she gave me a body massage.

It is hard to undertand women sometimes. I really did not know why the young doctor had a crush on me. I knew from the moment she started to be interested in me after I had my hair cut. I did not want to wait in the clinic for a long time.When I was walking from the elevator, I saw her standing at the corner looking at me. As I went back to the clinic, the nurse called me immediately. She took me into a small room. I was waiting for the young doctor. She examined me very carefully. She began to talk too much. I saw her cheeks red, nose roughed (rouged? The red make-up? women don't put it on their noses! this whole sentence is unclear - are you talking about her makeup or about her blushing?), and her lips red. She wanted me to come back in three months. When I was walking out of the clinic, I saw the old doctor was jealous. It seemed to me he was kind of hostile.
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