Which sentence is correct:
Attached are selection sheets for your project along with a sketch for cross-reference of the rooms as mentioned in my voice message this morning.
Attached are selection sheets for your project, along with a sketch for cross-reference of the rooms, as mentioned in my voice message this morning.
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I can't tell if either is correct because I don't know whether you mentioned both items this morning. But it seems like you only mentioned the second thing, in which case neither is correct. Clarity is a million times more important than style. Usually. Don't get hypnotized by the sound of your own voice.
"Attached are selection sheets for your project along with the sketch for cross-reference of the rooms that I mentioned in my voice message this morning."
Great, thanks so much!