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I think -as he has now enough money -he would start some business.

Have I punctuated the sentence correctly?

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sundarnazHave I punctuated the sentence correctly?

The sentence itself needs some changes. You can do it in several different ways.

Now that he has enough money I think he'll start a business.
I think he'll start a business now that he has enough money.

If you want dashes, you'll have to make real dashes (—), not just hyphens (-). Place spaces before and after the dash for journalistic style. Leave no spaces for academic style. (Note the position of "now" below.)

I think — as he now has enough money — he will start a business.
I think—as he now has enough money—he will start a business.

(To produce a dash, use Alt0151.)

CJ

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Thanks.