Hello All,

I hope someone can help me because my punctuation/grammer/syntax usage isn't so great. I'm trying to utilize the text in bold from the quote below:

Ah-ah, I know what you're thinking punk. You're thinking did he fire six shots or only five? And to tell you the truth I've forgotten myself in all this excitement. But being this is a .44 Magnum - the most powerful hand gun in the world and will blow your head clean off, you've got to ask yourself a question--Do I feel lucky? Well, do ya punk!

and put it into this paragraph:

Two levels below stupid! That's what you’d have to be to miss the simple fact that the number of people using the Internet is increasing every year. Ah-ah, we know what you're thinking...but you have to ask yourself one question: do I have a Web presence? Well, do ya...?

Can someone help me with the punctuation? My grammarian friend can't seem to see the forest for the trees because he is missing 1) the humor, 2) style in which I am trying to deliver/communicate this messageEmotion: smile

All help is much appreciated. Thanks in advance.
t.
I don't really understand what you're trying to do. You're trying to put the bold sentences into the second paragraph? Where into the second paragraph would you like to put them, and what is causing you difficulty in doing so?
reference to the previously bolded sentence is here

Two levels below stupid! That's what you’d have to be to miss the simple fact that the number of people using the Internet is increasing every year. Ah-ah, we know what you're thinking...but you have to ask yourself one question: do I have a Web presence? Well, do ya...?
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Let me rephrase the question. Being that my punctuation/grammer/syntax usage isn't so great. I'm hoping that someone could/would help me with the punctuation on the quote below:

Ah-ah, we know what you're thinking...but you have to ask yourself one question: do I have a Web presence? Well, do ya...?

tia
t.
Well, that's really hard to say without more information. What style are you going for? To whom are you writing this, and under what circumstances?