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The two maps offer a comparison between the Pacific Railway station in the year 1998 and the present time.
In 1998, there were platforms with four rail tracks in the top right corner stretching down towards a line of three buildings in the opposite corner: a café, a shop, and a ticket office right in the corner. The left side was mostly vacant except for a large comfort station towards the centre of the station.
The restrooms are replaced now by a vertical line of two shops and a restaurant. In the top left corner has also been added platforms with three rail tracks opposite which is a supermarket. The only change in the bottom left corner is the removal of the shop whose space has been used to expand the ticket office twice as large.
Overall, it is evident that in the 1998 configuration, the left half of the area was deserted, so the most striking changes took place on this side towards the middle, developing the actual working station twice as large.
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The two [ 1] maps plans [ 2] offer a comparison between compare the Pacific Railway station in the year 1998 and the present time.
In 1998, there were platforms with four rail tracks in the top right corner stretching down towards a line of three buildings in the opposite corner: – a café, a shop, and a ticket office, right in the bottom corner. The left side was mostly vacant except for a large comfort station towards toilet facility near the centre of the station.
The restrooms are toilet was replaced now by a vertical line of two shops and a restaurant. In the top left corner has also been added Three more tracks and platforms have also been added in the top left corner, with three rail tracks opposite which is and there is now a supermarket in the bottom left corner. The only change in the bottom [ 3] left right corner is the removal of the shop whose space has been used to expand the ticket office to twice its former size. as large.The cafe is still there, but now it is right next to the new enlarged ticket office.
Overall, it is evident that in the 1998 configuration, the left half of the area was deserted, so the most striking changes took place on this side towards the middle, developing the actual working station twice as large. [ 4]
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[ 1]: These are not maps. You can use “plans” or the more general “diagrams”.
[ 2]: This is a summary task. Unnecessarily complicating your phrasing will not earn you extra marks. In fact, it is quite the opposite; it may make you lose marks!
[ 3]: Silly mistakes like that cost you valuable marks in the exam! ALWAYS go over your work before submitting it.
[ 4]: This is repetitive waffle.