Here's my effort to put a new meaning into the song. As I'm not a native English speaker, I would like to ask someone to help find some possible grammatical/semantic errors in the text. Also, if some words look out of place, please point them out. Thanks in advance!


Look closely into Nature's face.
A change is clearly taking place.
She's ready for the winter.

The eyes take on a haunted gaze
And leave behind those summer days.
She's ready for the winter.

This ain't no game of kiss and tell
The implications how you knew so well.
Are you ready for the winter?

But seasons change. And someone new
Will play the passion out that we once knew.
Now we're ready for the winter.

Remember love how it was the same?
We scratched and hurt each other's growing pains.
Now we're ready for the winter.

And still I stand this very day
With a subtle wish to fly away.
Yes I'm ready. Ready for the winter.



Here's the original text for reference:

Look deep into the April face
A change is clearly taking place
Looking for the summer The eyes take on a certain gaze
And leave behind the springtime days
Go looking for the summer This ain't no game of kiss and tell
The implications how you knew so well
Go looking for the summer The time has come and they must go
To play the passion out that haunts you so
Looking for the summer Remember love how it was the same
We scratched and hurt each other's growing pains
We were looking for the summer And still I stand this very day
With a burning wish to fly away
I'm still looking, looking for the summer

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