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Hello, I wrote a recommendation letter, but I don't feel like it is good enough. Could you please help me to change it?


Dear []:

I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for Bat-erdene Egshiglen, an undergraduate student in our Bachelor of Science in Mathematics program.

I have known Egshiglen for the past two semesters as she has taken the following courses that I teach: Analysis I, Analysis II. As her professor, I have had an opportunity to observe her participation and interaction in class and to evaluate her knowledge of the subject matter.

She is an outstanding student in all respects. She always came to class prepared and has proven that through hard work and teamwork, she can accomplish tasks in a courteous and timely manner.

This program is entirely taught in English and as Egshiglen is not a native speaker she had some struggles with understanding the mathematics words, but now she overcame her weaknesses and became fluent.

She will be a dedicated student and a competent professional. I recommend Egshiglen very highly. Please let me know if there is any additional information I can provide to support you in your decision-making process.

Sincerely,

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I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for Bat-erdene Egshiglen, an undergraduate student in our Bachelor of Science in Mathematics program.

I have known Egshiglen for the past two semesters. She has been in my Analysis I and Analysis II classes where I have had an opportunity to observe her participation and interaction in class and to evaluate her comprehension of the subject matter.

She is an outstanding student in all respects. She always came to class prepared and has proven that through hard work and collaboration, she can compete successfully with her classmates. This program is entirely taught in English and as Egshiglen is not a native speaker she had some struggles with understanding the specialized mathematics vocabulary, but that did not hinder her ability to perform well.

She will be a dedicated student and a competent professional. I recommend Egshiglen very highly. Please let me know if there is any additional information I can provide to support you in your decision-making process.

Sincerely,

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