Dear MrWe are a well Established Professional Estate Agent, being Fellow Overseas Members Of The NAEA Specialising in The Sale of New and Resale Properties, May I ask If you Have An Overseas Agent Acting For Yourselves On the Costa Blanca/Calida Murcia Regions? If not Could you possibly be interested With Euro Select Estates Representing yourself here in Spain on a shared Commission Basis. If you already Have and are Contented with your present Personnel Here In Spain, May I Thank you for Taking the Time to Read This Email and Maybe Keep Ourselves On File for any future Collaborations. Yours Truly. John Latham..... Selling Houses on The Costa Blanca since 1998 .
The main problem is all those capital letters. Only use a capital at the start of sentences and at the start of proper nouns. It looks daft like this - why are you using so many? Alo, you are misusing yourselves and ourselves - these are not formal versions of you and us, they have different meanings altogether.

'acting for you' not 'acting for yourselves'

If not, would you be interested in Euro Select Estates representing you (not yourself) ....

and ask you to keep us (not ourselves) on file ....
Thanks nona I am rubbish with English, apart from that would you say it was a letter worthy of sending?

take it you done the Jump? did one for charity many years ago but came down with a bump OUCH
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You are not rubbish at English at all - just a bit addicted to capital letters. Emotion: smile

Yes I did a charity one - oh yes I landed with quite a bump too but I loved it!
nona can i be cheeky! if poss could you copy change and paste back to me.??? also see attached if you like a laugh taken in Far East.
That is cheeky.Emotion: stick out tongue You can change the words yourself and I've highlighted all the capital letters you should keep, change the rest. Off you go!

Dear Mr

We are a well Established Professional Estate Agent, being Fellow Overseas Members Of The NAEA Specialising in The Sale of New and Resale Properties. May I ask If you Have An Overseas Agent Acting For Yourselves On the Costa Blanca/Calida Murcia Regions? If not Could you possibly be interested With Euro Select Estates Representing yourself here in Spain on a shared Commission Basis.

If you already Have and are Contented with your present Personnel Here In Spain, May I Thank you for Taking the Time to Read This Email and Maybe Keep Ourselves On File for any future Collaborations.
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Hi Nona, thanks , did sort before reply ,an look no CAPITALS

Regards redwine