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Hi folks,

Following is my attempt, please go throught it and suggest any improvements that can be done. Many thanks.

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Dear Mr. D

I've been meaning to update you on the developments, thought I'd update you once everything is finalized. I've received the offer letter and pleased to inform you that I've decided to join with the team of Mr.C. At the moment I've taken leave from office and need a little time before I come to know the exact employment starting date with Company C.

Thank you very much for your willingness to recommend me. I place a great deal of trust in your judgement and appreciate the support you provided in this process. I will be in contact from time to time. I thank you again for your assistance in all these, which I think is important step in my career growth and hoping that I've made right decision.

Regards

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Dear Mr. D

I've been meaning to update you on the developments; I thought I'd update you once everything is finalized. I've received the offer letter and am pleased to inform you that I've decided to join with the team of Mr.C. At the moment I've taken leave from work (or school?) office and need a little time before I will come to know the exact employment starting date with Company C.
Thank you very much for your willingness to recommend me. I place a great deal of trust in your judgement and appreciate the support you provided in this process. I will be in contact from time to time. I thank you again for your assistance in all these, in securing this position which I think is an important step in my career growth. I hope and hoping that I've made the right decision.
Regards
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I recently accepted a job offer I coudnt resist. A promotion that I longed for over 3 years. Now, it is time to say thank you for those that made my job easier for me and I need to inform all my clients and collaguage that effective today, I no longer work for that said department .

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