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Hello,
could you tell me if this sentence is ok?
(it's part of a longer text)

Her diligent attitude to work and exceptional interpersonal skills render Ms Brown a model employee.

Thank you for your help.
I really appreciate it.
Kind regards.
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I'm not sure I'd agree that an attitude can be diligent. People can be diligent, but I'm not so sure about attitudes.

I'd say "attitude toward work". "render" seems OK.

CJ
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