I need some help rephrasing this thesis statement for the beginning of my conclusion paragraph: Both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm, illustrate people are hungry for power. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks.
xpistonsxBoth William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm, illustrate people are hungry for power.
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The main characters in both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm are ruthless and power-hungry.

I need help restating my thesis. My thesis is 'Americans should have the right to health care because a right to health care could improve public health and save lives.'

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chalk grapeAmericans should have the right to health care because a right to health care could improve public health and save lives

Americans should have the right to health care because it could improve public health and save lives.

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Hi I need some help rephrasing this thesis 'From an interpersonal standpoint, the creation of life and the determination of continuing life should not solely be seen as a woman’s choice; rather, it should be seen from a moral perspective.'

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I see no use for the introductory phrase. You also do not make clear whether the woman's choice is valid at all; in my revision, I have presumed it is:

The creation and preservation of life should not be seen simply as a woman’s choice but from a moral perspective.

I need help rephrasing my thesis. It is...While James Murray and I come from different backgrounds, we share similar characteristics but with different reasons. We are dependable in being and helping others in need, ambitious to go after what we desire, and kind in every aspect.

'While' = 'but', so your first sentence leaves the reader a bit off balance. I don't know what 'being...others' means. I think you've misused 'aspect', too.

James Murray and I come from different backgrounds, so we share similar characteristics but from different origins. We are dependable in helping others, ambitious for what we desire, and kind in every respect.

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