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Hi! I'm writing a reply email to my ex lecturer, I hope some one can help me to check on my grammar and writing tone. Thanks for your help in advance!

Hi xxx,

Sorry for my late reply! I had overseen the email as I have been long time never clear my personal inbox.

There isn't much snow in UK as what I have expected, or maybe is it just for this year? Finally the spring is here! The day light is getting longer, and this makes me much efficient than I was in the winter time.

After the first semester, I do realise that how different it is in UOS than in TU. It's not only the teaching style, and also the way of assessment. This had made me thought of the need in changing my own learning style. We have been discussing among our coursemates about learning in groups this semester, I hope we can see the results of it soon! My personal tutor is Dr xxx, a nice and casual lecturer!

Before I end the email, I also have an exciting news to share with you! I have participated in the Women in Engineering's innovation challenge, and I won in the competition! It was not a big competition anyway, but I have been invited to join in the talent community and it does make me feel more confident to myself, in this career.

I guess that's all about it for today, I hope this email finds you well!

Yours sincerely,
Xxx
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Hi xxx,

Sorry for delayed reply! I had overlooked my email, and it's been a long time since I cleared out my inbox. There isn't as
much snow in the UK as I had expected, or maybe there is just less this year. Finally spring is here! The days are getting longer, and this makes me much more efficient than I was in the wintertime. After the first semester, I realize
how different it is in UOS from TU. It's not only the teaching style, but also the manner of assessing. It made me think I might need to change my own learning style. We classmates have been discussing among ourselves the idea of studying in groups this semester, I hope we can see the results of it (of what?) soon! My personal tutor is Dr xxx, a nice, casual lecturer! Before I end this email, I have exciting news to share with you! I participated in the Women in Engineering's innovation challenge, and I won the competition! It was not a big competition, but I have been invited to join in the talent community,and it does make me feel more confident in myself in this career. I guess that's about it for today, I hope this email finds you well!
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Thank you!!!