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Regarding the insufficient air conditioning in a room at ABC building, the technician had arranged a detailed diagnosis and no problem of the existing air conditioners was found as reported by the technician.

The higher heat load of 50 occupants in the room is the reason to cause insufficient air conditioning because this number exceeds the existing cooling capacity of the room.

It is recommended that reducing the number of occupants shall be arranged in the room or the installation of additional air conditioners shall be required to solve the problem of insufficient air conditioning.

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Regarding the insufficient inadequate air conditioning in one room at the ABC building, the technician has had arranged a detailed diagnosis carried out a thorough assessment, and no problem of with the existing air conditioners was found. as reported by the technician.

The higher heat load of 50 occupants in the room is the reason to cause insufficient behind the poor air conditioning because this number exceeds the existing maximum cooling capacity of the system. room.

It is recommended that reducing you reduce the number of occupants shall be arranged in the room or the installation of install additional air conditioners shall be required to resolve the this problem. of insufficient air conditioning.

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Regarding the inadequate air conditioning in one room at the ABC building, the technician has carried out a thorough assessment, and no problem with the existing air conditioners was found.

The higher heat load of 50 occupants in the room is the reason behind the poor air conditioning because this number exceeds the maximum cooling capacity of the system.

We recommend the improvement measures shown below:

For technical measures, alleviating the number of occupants in the room or installation of additional air conditioners is recommended to resolve this problem.

For management measures, changing other room with sufficient air conditioning is recommended to satisfy the high heat load demand.

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