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Please correct my wrong grammar

Hello Mr hart, this is Binny

I received your message saying that you were supposed to give the presentation this Friday. But since you need to attend an important workshop that day. So you want me to give the presentation. So I have checked my schedule and found out that there is nothing urgent so I'm happy to help you out. Why don't we meet tomorrow for lunch and discuss about it.

If you wish to speak more about this matter, please call me back at the same number. See you soon.
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Hello Mr. Hart, this is Binny

I received your message saying that you were supposed to give the presentation this Friday but wanted me to give it instead . But since you need to attend an important workshop that day. So you want me to give the presentation. So I have checked my schedule and found out that there is nothing urgent so I'm I would be happy to help you out. Why don't we meet tomorrow for lunch and discuss about it?

If you wish to speak more further about this matter, please call me back (at the same number). See you soon.

Binny

CJ
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Thank you for correcting me but,

It's an answering machine message, so I
CalifJimHello Mr. Hart, this is Binny
is that incorrect?