hi! can you please help me edit and correct my letter of request for my vacation.... thank you very much!Emotion: smile

dear sir,

This is to request your good office to grant me the annual vacation these comming Ramadan (September 02 - September 20 , 2008). In view of this I would like to ask permission also if I can have my vacation on my mother's place instead of going back on the Philippines. Could you please also arrange to have my passport return to me so that I can apply for my visit visa earlier on the said date.

Thank You very much for your kind assistance and quick approval on my request

Truly Yours,

Maya
Dear Sir
I would like to request permission to take my annual holiday to coincide with the dates of Ramadan, from 2nd to 20th September 2008.
In view of this I would like to ask permission also if I can have my vacation on my mother's place instead of going back on the Philippines. - I am not sure what you mean by this sentence. Do you mean that you want to take holiday in place of your mother? Who is going back to the Philippines?
Could you please also arrange to have my passport return to me so that I can apply for my visit visa earlier on the said date. - Could you please arrange for my passport to be returned (to me) as soon as possible, so that I can apply for my visa (in advance/before leaving).
Thank You very much for your kind assistance and quick approval on my request - Thank you very much for your kind assistance.
Yours faithfully
thank you very much for editing my letter... i really appreaciate it....

i want to have my annual vacation on my mother's place in Cyprus.
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Dear Sir,

This is request to you kindly grant me Annual Vacation these coming Eid from ( 25th Dec.08 - 25th Feb.08) In the view of this I would like to request you again if you could arrange for my Travel Order ASAP ,

Thank you very much for your kind assistance and quick approval on my request ,

Best regards

A.B.C
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You want a 2-month leave?? And why so urgent?-- you don't leave (or get fired) until December 25th.

Dear Mr [surname],

This is request that you kindly grant me Annual Vacation for this coming Eid, from 25 December 2008 to 25 February 2009 and arrange for my travel order ASAP.

Thank you very much for your kind assistance and quick approval of my request.

Best regards,

A.B.C
Dear Mr [surname],
I woul like to request to grant me an Annual Vacation for this coming Eid, from 25 December 2008 to 25 February 2009 and do please arrange my travel order ASAP.
Thank you very much for your kind assistance and quick approval of my request.
Best regards,

ABC
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