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Please Help me with my draft letter....
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July 4, 2013

RODULFO J. ARIESGA
Director IV
CGS, Cluster 1

Thru: JOSEPH B. ANACAY
Director IV
CGS, Cluster 6

Dear Sir:

I have requested a transfer to COA-Region 12 dated april 15, 2013, preferably to an audit team based on Cotabato City.

Unfortunately my cluster has no audit team based on Cotabato City under their supervision.

Fortunately, I found an Audit Group based Cotabato City under your cluster supervision.

1.} Audit Group A - BSP
2.} Audit Group B - DBP

May I have the honor to be transferred to one of the said Audit Group under your cluster supervision.

Praying and Hoping for your very kind and favorable consideration.
Thank you very much.

Very truly yours,

AZHARI
Auditor
CGS, Cluster 6
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July 4, 2013

RODULFO J. ARIESGA
Director IV
CGS, Cluster 1

Thru: JOSEPH B. ANACAY
Director IV
CGS, Cluster 6

Dear Mr Ariesga,

I requested a transfer to COA-Region 12 on April 15th, preferably to an audit team based in Cotabato City. Unfortunately my cluster has no audit team based there under their supervision, but I have found two Audit Groups there under your cluster supervision:

1. Audit Group A - BSP
2. Audit Group B - DBP

I would like to request transfer to one of these Audit Groups. Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Very truly yours,

AZHARI
Auditor
CGS, Cluster 6
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thank you sir, it would be a great help for me and my family...

i'm very desperate to learn englisg grammar properly..

I understand when someone speak/write in english for to me, but when i speak i can't open my mouth and when i'm replying in writing i can organize my words. tnx