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I would like to seek someone comments on my email below.

Dear ABC

I’m really looking forward to the chance to talk with you about professional interview.

Unfortunately, I need to leave China for handling a family issue on that period. As a result, I ‘m wondering if we could reschedule this interview for a later date. I’m available after May 2019.

I’m so sorry to throw a wrench in your schedule. But, I’m still really enthusiastic about this opportunity and am hopefully that we can connect soon.

Thanks so much for understanding

Regards

XYZ

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Ben9108I’m really looking forward to the chance to talk with you about professional interview.

That is a strange sentence. Why do you want to discuss an interview in the future? I assume that you want some training in how to do a good interview.

Ben9108Unfortunately, I need to leave China for personal reasons during handling a family issue on that period.
Ben9108 result, I ‘m

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Ben9108 I’m available after May 2019.

Do you mean June?

Ben9108and am hopefully that we can connect soon.
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Please comments on my revised email below. Thanks


Dear ABC

Please accept my sincere apologies for not being able to attend the interview on 20 Feb 2019 due to I need to leave china for a personal emergency during that period. As result, I’m wondering if we could reschedule this interview for a later date. I’m available in May 2019.

I look forward to hearing from you regarding the rescheduling of the interview and express my apologies again.

Regards

XYZ

Ben9108Please comment on my revised email below. Thanks

Dear ABC

Please accept my sincere apologies for not being able to attend the interview on 20 Feb 2019. I due to I need to leave to go to China for urgent personal reasons a personal emergency (an emergency means right now, not three weeks from now!) during that period. (One day is not a period. A period of time is a few days, a week, etc.) As result, I’m wondering if we could reschedule this interview for a later date. I’m available any time after May 1, in May 2019.

I look forward to hearing from you regarding the rescheduling of the interview and express my apologies again.

Regards

XYZ