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Dear Sir,

It is humbly submitted that I have been working as -------- at your Tando Allahyar Branch. I would like to request you that my son was admitted in the Hospital for about 22 days under the observation of the various doctors. In this connection various medical reports were carried out during staying at Hospital i.e MRI,CT Scan etc, after observing of the medical reports of my son idetified Brain Haemmrage, and abnormal. As per the instructions received from the various doctors to monitor and continuing timely medical check ups time to time. Therefore, my current posting at Tando Allahyar Branch, and I can't shut my office during working hours in order to take my son to the Hyderabad- Hospital.In such circumstances, I request you to kindly transfer me from Tando Allahyar to Hyderabad, as I can easily take care of my son.

Dear Seniors please correct my letter, I'm really so confused, and disappointed because of the posting order.
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Dear Sir,





It is humbly submitted that I have been working as -------- at your Tando Allahyar Branch. I would like to notify you that my son was admitted to the Hospital for about 22 days under the observation of various doctors. Various medical tests were carried out during his stay there, such as an MRI, CT-Scan etc, and after analysis of the tests and reports, the doctors identified that he had a brain hemorrhage. The instructions I received from the doctors were to monitor him and continue frequent medical check-ups so that they can watch him closely. However, with my current posting at Tando Allahyar Branch, I can't close my office during working hours in order to take my son to the Hyderabad Hospital. Due to such circumstances, I request you to kindly transfer me from Tando Allahyar to Hyderabad, so I can more easily take care of my son.

Mcbian, I sincerely hope this is helpful to you.

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Thanks for your kind support. I also expect from other seniors to check it out. If there is any changes required.
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my current posting at Rajanpur, I request you to kindly transfer me from Rajanpur to Dera Ghazi Khan.
i am a disable person (Leg disability)and i have difficulties from Dera Ghazi Khan to Rajanpur during the Travlling.
and my mother and father is old person .

Mcbian, I sincerely hope this is helpful to you