Letter

Customer Service
Hallmak Cleaners
456 Pearl Ochards, Ridgeland

Dear Susan Joss:

I am writing to apply fo th Customer Service position. I am attending Jones Junior College and my major is social work. I feel that this job will not only help me in becoming a socia worker but will also help prepare me to work work with the public.

As you can see from reading my resume, that I have had jobs that require me to keep a healthy attiude. My motto is when I smile the world smile. I feel that I am very good at putting smiles on people face. I enjoy communciating with others, which is a must when my job require it.

I am recognized by my instructors for maintaing a 3.0 G.P.A. My instructors have suggested me to becom an instructor but I think that customer service is something that will help me in the future.

I am very interested in putting my experience to use in Cusstomer Service and I hope to hear from you soon. To reach me you can call me at 454-787-5494 or my cell phone at 454-454-8975. My e-mailing address is the following Email Removed

Sincerly yours
Kesha Mass

This is my resume
Qualification - I feel that I am good at communcating with others and working out problems that people may find unresloved. I am dedicated to making others happy and seeing that they are satisfied. I will do whatever it takes to put smile on people face and make them feel welcome. Most importanly make them want to come back so that I can serve them again.

Education- 1999-2003 Diploma, Quitman High School
2003-present Currently in College

Employment
2002 Cashier, Kentucky Fried Chicken
At this job my duties included greeting customers in a nice, friendly and respectable manner. I alos had to take orders from customers and maker sure that the ordrs were filled correctly and timely; as well s cleaning the lobby and restroom.

2004- Present Cashier, Church's

At this job my duties included greeting customers in a pleasant way, making sure to answer queston about the menu when necessary. I alos had to clean the lobby and restroom

can I please get some feedback on how my letter and resume sound.
daniel5,

The first step is to copy and paste your letter and resume into MS Word to find all your spelling mistakes. Have a look at MS Word's grammar function too. You have numerous errors in grammar that you should try to spot on your own.

I want you to learn how to fix your own errors. If you simply come here and have us fix your errors for you, then you are relying on us. You should learn to rely upon your own skills.
I am writing to apply fo th Customer Service position. I am attending Jones Junior College and my major is social work. I feel that this job will not only help me in becoming a socia worker but will also help prepare me to work work with the public.


I am writing to apply for the Customer Service position. I am attending Jones Junior College with a major in social work. I feel that this job will not only help me in becoming a social worker but will also help prepare me to work deleted duplicate word with the public.

For what it is worth, I would emphasize what you can do for THEM, not what they can do for YOU. If I was an employer, your needs come a distant second to my needs.

MountainHiker
I did do a spell check but I guess it did not check everyword. I was tired when I type this because I had just got off work. But since I am causes so many problems than I will stop writing to this website and put my own knowledge to use and please don't ever write me back. P.S. Have a blessed life

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