would you please comment.

I am writing to response to your advertisement in JobsDB.com inviting applications for Safety Officer in your company.

I have 8 years post qualification experience in Safety Officer. I have Higher Certificate in Building Studies. I have a HKSAR contract experience. I familiar with computer skill: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Chinese and English word processing.

I am immediate available for the post.

Enclosed please find a resume with details of my personal particulars. I should be very grateful if you grant me an interview so that I can explain my qualifications more fully.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely

XXXX
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

Is this an email? If it's not, you need to put address/date/greeting at the top.

You have written quite a good letter. I've made some changes.

Best wishes, Clive

I am writing in response to your advertisement in JobsDB.com inviting applications for the position of Safety Officer in your company.

I have 8 years experience as a Safety Officer. I have a Higher Certificate in Building Studies, and HKSAR contract experience. I am familiar with the following computer software: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Chinese and English word processing.

I am immediately available for this post.

Enclosed please find a detailed resume. I should be very grateful if you grant me an interview so that I can explain my qualifications more fully.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,
Hi, Clive

Thank you your comment.

Would you please comment my resume content, too.

George

GEORGE

email address

Address: Phone:

__________________________________________________________

EDUCATION

2005 of Technology Bachelor of Science (Safety and Health)

1998 Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Higher Certificate in Building Studies Education (IVE)

1987 Construction Industry Training Construction Safety Officer Certificate Authority (CITA)

PROFESSIONAL QULAIIFICATION

2006 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

1998 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIP

2005 Institute of Occupational Safety IOSH Member No. 100121

and Health

Available: Immediate

Skill: Familiar with computer software: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Word

WORKING EXPERIENCES

Period

Job description



June 2002

~ Present



CLP Engineering Limited

Safety Engineer

With 4 years experience performing Registered Safety Officer of CLPE, including, a full time Safety Officer for Highways Department Project MOM Contract No. 01/HY/2002 since Jun 2003, the projects had been handled including KCRC-Siemens-DB1500 Project, Airport Authority Airport Lighting Maintenance No. M120, CLP-Castle Peak Power Plant Building Renovation Project, MTRCL etc., the main duties included coordinating safety meeting and activities, performing site safety check, reporting site safety performance of subcontractors and investigating any accident happened.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE polices.

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections & internal audits and to address required follow up actions to responsible units.

Perform incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations.

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submit monthly RSO’s report to CLPE.

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.



December 2001 ~ June 2002


Geotechnics & Concrete Engineering (HK) Limited

Safety Officer,

Reporting to the Safety Manager as a full time safety officer for Civil Engineering and Development Department Contract no. GE/2001/13

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Managing GCE (HK) Ltd. Safety management system

Attending client safety meeting

Perform joint safety check

Report site safety performance monthly

Investigate any accident happened

Organize safety training



September 1997

~December 2001


Kent’s Construction & Engineering Company

Safety Officer,

With 4 years overseeing the site safety for Highways Department -Public Lighting Construction & Maintenance Contract.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer (RSO) duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise project management team on legal compliance related to safety issues;

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE policies;

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections and system audits and address required follow up actions to responsible project;

Performance incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations;

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submitting monthly RSO’s report to CLPE;

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE;

Perform safety advisor role in the Company Safety Committee Meeting;

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

And also, attending CLPE safety meeting, joint site safety check with CLPE, reporting the site safety performance monthly and investigating any accident happened to CLPE


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Hi,

I'd be happy to. But first, can you please reformat it aand repst it so that it fits more on the 'left side'? I can't see it all in the 'window' of my screen.

Thanks, Clive
Dear Clive,

I set the format for your easy reading as follow:

EDUCATION

2005 of Technology Bachelor of Science (Safety and Health)

1998 Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Higher Certificate in Building Studies Education (IVE)

1987 Construction Industry Training Construction Safety Officer Certificate Authority (CITA)

PROFESSIONAL QULAIIFICATION

2006 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

1998 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIP

2005 Institute of Occupational Safety IOSH Member No. 100121

and Health

Available: Immediate

Skill: Familiar with computer software: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Word

WORKING EXPERIENCES

Period Job description



CLP Engineering Limited Safety Engineer

June 2002~ Present

With 4 years experience performing Registered Safety Officer of CLPE, including, a full time Safety Officer for Highways Department Project MOM Contract No. 01/HY/2002 since Jun 2003, the projects had been handled including KCRC-Siemens-DB1500 Project, Airport Authority Airport Lighting Maintenance No. M120, CLP-Castle Peak Power Plant Building Renovation Project, MTRCL etc., the main duties included coordinating safety meeting and activities, performing site safety check, reporting site safety performance of subcontractors and investigating any accident happened.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE polices.

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections & internal audits and to address required follow up actions to responsible units.

Perform incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations.

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submit monthly RSO’s report to CLPE.

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.


Geotechnics & Concrete Engineering (HK) Limited Safety Officer,

December 2001 ~ June 2002

Reporting to the Safety Manager as a full time safety officer for Civil Engineering and Development Department Contract no. GE/2001/13

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Managing GCE (HK) Ltd. Safety management system

Attending client safety meeting

Perform joint safety check

Report site safety performance monthly

Investigate any accident happened

Organize safety training



Kent’s Construction & Engineering Company Safety Officer,

September 1997 ~December 2001

With 4 years overseeing the site safety for Highways Department -Public Lighting Construction & Maintenance Contract.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer (RSO) duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise project management team on legal compliance related to safety issues;

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE policies;

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections and system audits and address required follow up actions to responsible project;

Performance incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations;

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submitting monthly RSO’s report to CLPE;

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE;

Perform safety advisor role in the Company Safety Committee Meeting;

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

And also, attending CLPE safety meeting, joint site safety check with CLPE, reporting the site safety performance monthly and investigating any accident happened to CLPE

Hi,

The format still does not seem quite right, but I'll try to comment. I'm commenting based on the format that people use here where I live.

Put your name /address / phone / email at the top, as a heading.

Then put these sections, in this order:

OBJECTIVE (what position you are looking for, very briefly)

SKILLS

EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE

EDUCATION

PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS / MEMBERSHIPS

REFERENCES (Just say 'available on request')

Why don't you make the changes I've suggested, if you want to, and then repost this.

The format you gave me to work with is an awkward one.

Can you just type in, directly, what you want me to look at?

Best wishes, Clive
___________________________________________

EDUCATION

2005 Curtin University of Technology Bachelor of Science (Safety and Health)

1998 Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Higher Certificate in Building Studies Education (IVE)

1987 Construction Industry Training Construction Safety Officer Certificate Authority (CITA)

PROFESSIONAL QULAIIFICATION

2006 Labour Department where? Registered Safety Officer

1998 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIP

2005 Institute of Occupational Safety IOSH Member No. 100121

and Health Where? Which country?

Available: Immediate Just say this in cover letter

Skill: Familiar with computer software: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Word 'Familiar' is a weak word. 'Good knowledge of ...' ?

WORKING EXPERIENCES

Period Job description

CLP Engineering Limited Where, what city/country? Safety Engineer

June 2002~ Present Put a sentence for overall duties, and the rest in brief point form, starting with a 'bullet' dot. You don't need all these reference numbers, the reader wil not care

Too long, too many numbers, use point form >>> With 4 years experience performing Registered Safety Officer of CLPE, including, a full time Safety Officer for Highways Department Project MOM Contract No. 01/HY/2002 since Jun 2003, the projects had been handled including KCRC-Siemens-DB1500 Project, Airport Authority Airport Lighting Maintenance No. M120, CLP-Castle Peak Power Plant Building Renovation Project, MTRCL 595A etc., the main duties included coordinating safety meeting and activities, performing site safety check, reporting site safety performance of subcontractors and investigating any accident happened.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE polices.

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections & internal audits and to address required follow up actions to responsible units.

Perform incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations.

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submit monthly RSO’s report to CLPE.

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

Geotechnics & Concrete Engineering (HK) Limited Safety Officer,

December 2001 ~ June 2002

Reporting to the Safety Manager as a full time safety officer for Civil Engineering and Development Department Contract no. GE/2001/13

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Managing GCE (HK) Ltd. Safety management system

Attending client safety meeting

Perform joint safety check

Report site safety performance monthly

Investigate any accident happened

Organize safety training

Kent’s Construction & Engineering Company Safety Officer,

September 1997 ~December 2001 Put the dates on same line as Compnay name, and in front of the name

With 4 years overseeing the site safety for Highways Department -Public Lighting Construction & Maintenance Contract. For past jobs, put your verbs in past tense, ie performed

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer (RSO) duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise project management team on legal compliance related to safety issues;

Manage company’s Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE policies;

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections and system audits and address required follow up actions to responsible project;

Performance incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations;

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submitting monthly RSO’s report to CLPE;

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE;

Perform safety advisor role in the Company Safety Committee Meeting;

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

And also, attending CLPE safety meeting, joint site safety check with CLPE, reporting the site safety performance monthly and investigating any accident happened to CLPE
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