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The given table demonstrates the number of five different categories of moles of transportation was utilized by Australians in 2010,2012 and 2014. Overall, it is apparent that all kinds of vehicles experienced an upward trend in the period and the major vehicles are used for passengers. In addition, the most alteration was witnessed in that of motorcycles.

In terms of passenger vehicles, its value stood at 118000000 in the starting years. Then this figure increased steadily to 12700000 and 13000000 in 2012,2014, respectively. Undergoing a similar trend, a gradual rise was seen in the number of commercial vehicles. This figure rose by 400000 from 2300000 to 2700000 over the period. Additionally, the change in the number of commercial vehicles was 17,4%, higher approximately 7% than that of passenger vehicles.


In comparison with motorcycles, its figure registered at 540000 in 2010, followed by a slight growth to 680000 and 709000 in 2012 and 2014, for the former and the latter. Besides, the figure for heavy trucks in 2012 was 6000 higher than that in 384000. The change of heavy trucks was 8.3 %, which was a quarter compared with that of mobiles. Light trucks were the most minor vehicles in Australia, although its alteration was 23,5%, after the number of light trucks.

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You misuse a lot of vocabulary words. Also, you do not write the "main features" very clearly. The paragraph structure is poor. Please read my advice on misused vocabulary words like figure, experience and witness.



The given (Do not write "given", "provided" or any other similar participle. It is not natural. ) table demonstrates (Wrong verb choice.) the number The number of five categories is 5) of five different categories (What are these categories?) of moles (A mole is an animal that is nearly blind and lives underground) of transportation was utilized (Ungrammatical) by Australians in 2010,2012 and 2014. (You must begin a new paragraph when you start writing about the content.) Overall, it is apparent that all kinds of vehicles experienced (wrong word. Cars do not have experiences.) an upward trend (Trends are for line graphs.) in the period and the major vehicles (Do you mean the largest in size, like trains?) are used for passengers. In addition, the most alteration (wrong word) was witnessed (Motorcycles do not see or feel. They do not witness things.) in that of motorcycles.

In terms of passenger vehicles, its value stood at 118000000 in the starting years. Then this figure increased steadily to 12700000 and 13000000 in 2012,2014, respectively. Undergoing a similar trend, a gradual (wrong word) rise was seen in the number of commercial vehicles. This figure It rose by 400000 from 2300000 to 2700000 over the period. Additionally, the change in the number of commercial vehicles was 17,4%, higher approximately (ungrammatical) 7% than that of passenger vehicles.

In comparison with motorcycles, (What are you comparing with?) its figure (wrong word) registered at 540000 in 2010, followed by a slight growth to 680000 and 709000 in 2012 and 2014, for the former and the latter. (That is not good word usage.) Besides, the figure (wrong word) for number of heavy trucks in 2012 was 6000 higher than that in 384000. The change of heavy trucks was 8.3 %, which was a quarter compared with that of mobiles. (Telephones?) Light trucks were the most minor (wrong word) vehicles in Australia, although its alteration (wrong word) was 23,5%, after the number of light trucks.

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The table lists the numbers of registered vehicles in Australia at three different points of time, 2010, 2012 and 2014. Numbers are given for each of five categories: passenger vehicles, commercial vehicles, motorcycles, heavy trucks and light trucks.

Overall, the greatest number of registrations were for passenger vehicles, more than five times as many as the second place category, commercial vehicles, and ten times that of the smallest category, light trucks. The rank order of the categories did not change in these years.

In total, Australia had over 15 million registered vehicles in 2010 and 17 million in 2014. Every category rose in numbers, with percentage changes ranging from 8 to 31 percent. In 2010, there were 11.8 million passenger cars and that went up to 13 million, or 10.2%. However, that was the second smallest increase of all types Only heavy trucks had a smaller gain, 8.3%, from 384 to 416 thousand. There were over a half million motorcycles registered in 2010, and their numbers went up, by nearly 31%, ending at 709 thousand.

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