can someone check this paragraph, Is it written coherently?

I succeeded with my team and won first place in solving the money change problem in our city using MATLAB and I have completed several projects using MATLAB and C++, for example,

  • Simulation the response of electromechanical circuits.
  • Modeling and simulation of dynamic systems.

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