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I want HR to understand and grasp the enormity of this job and if we did not have someone to do this type of work, the company will be fined thousands of dollars in violations. How do I rewrite this job role:

This role exists because without someone specifically designated to manage the information flow between the various Engineering professionals in the company (urban and field), it is likely that there will be delays and costly oversights resulting in NOPVs being leveled against the company. Most of this work is regulatory-driven.

Thanks for your help with the rewrite
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This role exists because without someone specifically designated to manage the information flow between the various engineering professionals in the company (urban and field), it is likely that there will be delays and costly oversights, resulting in NOPVs being leveled (I think you mean levied if these are fines and/or penalties) against the company. Most of this work is regulatory-driven.

I added a comma, but, except for that using a lower case e for engineering, the sentence was fine.

You could rewrite it as follows to avoid such a long and complex sentence:

This role exists to provide a specific designee to manage the information flow between the various engineering professionals in the company (urban and field). Making certain that the company avoides delays and costly oversights that could result in NOPVs being levied will be the chief function of this regulatory driven position.
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