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Can you help me more for rewriting sentences and checking some of them.
1. Her family sometimes got cheap tickets,
Her family..........................................
2. Parents are advised not to let young children climb on this
This.............................................................................
3. You are permitted to take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.
You........................................................................................
4. Customers are advised to book early so they are not disappointed.
Customers...............................................................................
Please check those sentences which I made:
1. Going by bus is quicker than cycling.
Cycling..is not as quick as bus.......................................
2. Large cars use more petrol than small cars
Small cars don't use petrol as much as large cars do.
3.If doesn't matter to me If a book is long or short
I don't care a book is long or short
4.It is essential for all visitors to leave their name at the reception.
All visitors should leave their name at the reception
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Huong Hoang1. Her family sometimes got cheap tickets,Her family..........................................2. Parents are advised not to let young children climb on thisThis.............................................................................3. You are permitted to take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.You........................................................................................4. Customers are advised to book early so they are not disappointed.Customers...............................................................................
First, let us see your own rewrites for sentences #1-4 above.

1. Going by bus is quicker than cycling.
Cycling is not as quick as going by bus.
2. Large cars use more petrol than small cars
Small cars don't use as much petrol as large cars do.
3.If doesn't matter to me if a book is long or short
I don't care whether a book is long or short
4.It is essential for all visitors to leave their name at the reception.
All visitors must leave their name at the reception
I forget most of English grammar Emotion: sad
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Huong HoangI forget most of English grammar
Don't worry. There is not very much. You will get it back quickly.
Here is my rewrites, please check them.

1. Her family sometimes got cheap tickets
Her family..........................................(???)
2. Parents are advised not to let young children climb on this
This............................................................................. (???)
Parents should not let young children climb on this.
It is advisable for parents not to let young children climb on this.
3. You are permitted to take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.
You can take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.
4. Customers are advised to book early so they are not disappointed.
Customers should book early so they are not disappointed
1 & 2 -- You must start with the given word, I think.

3. You are permitted to take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.
You can take one piece of hand luggage onto this plane.-- OK.
4. Customers are advised to book early so they are not disappointed.
Customers should book early so they are not disappointed -- OK
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I don't understand the first sentence.It is really very difficult. The second can be changed into passive, I think. But I forgot how to make Emotion: sad
Mister Micawber1 & 2 -- You must start with the given word, I think.
I am really not sure........ hmmm
1. Her family sometimes got cheap tickets.
-> Her family sometimes purchased tickets at a low price.
2.Parents are advised not to let young children climb on this
->This shouldn't be climbed on by young children.
Emotion: phew
Are they supposed to be converted to passive voice?

Then

1. Her family sometimes got cheap tickets.
-> Her family was sometimes sold cheap tickets.
2.Parents are advised not to let young children climb on this
->This shouldn't be climbed on by young children.
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