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Title: Type 2: Pie chart and Table

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Here is my essay:

The pie chart provides information about what Anthropologists graduating from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course, as well as the percentage of salaries that the anthropologists get in working after five years.

From the information in the pie chart provided the majority of Anthropology graduates finding full-time work with fifty percent. The percentage of people combining part-time work with the postgrad study is twenty percent. Besides, just eight percent of graduates choose to study postgrad full time and the information about all the rest of graduates is unknown (with eight percent).

After five-year working, most Anthropologists have salaries of more than twenty-five thousand dollars. Fifty percent of people work in government and earn the highest salaries of about fifty percent, compared to freelance consultants (less than 10 percent) and private companies (less than 20 percent). On the other hand, the proportion of people earning twenty-five thousand dollars to almost fifty thousand dollars in private companies are twice as much as the government sector or free consultants.

In general, the higher salaries for each type of employment are supplied, the more Anthropology graduates work there. (187 words)

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The pie chart provides information about what graduate anthropologists graduating from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course, as well as while the table compares three types of typical anthropologist jobs in terms of salary earned after five years of employment. the percentage of salaries that the anthropologists get in working after five years.

In general, most graduate anthropologists were able to find some form of employment after finishing university, and after five years of work, the majority were earning high salaries.

From the information in the pie chart, it can be seen that provided the majority half of the anthropology graduates finding found full-time work, with fifty percent. whereas the percentage of people graduates who managed to get part time jobs was 15%. A further 5% reported combining part-time work with the postgraduate study. is twenty percent. Besides, just eight percent 8% of graduates choose to study postgrad full-time postgraduate study, and 12% were unemployed. the information about all the rest of graduates is What the remaining 8% did was unknown. (with eight percent).

After five years working, most anthropologists (80%) employed as freelance consultants or in government have had salaries of more than twenty seventy-five to one-hundred thousand dollars. In contrast, only 55% of those working in private companies managed to earn that much. Interestingly, the proportions of anthropologists in the middle-income bracket (earning 50 to 75 thousand per annum) were highest for those in private companies (35%), while the percentages for freelancers and government workers were 15% each. Finally, those with a salary of 25-50 thousand represented 5-10% of professional anthropologists. Fifty percent of people work in government and earn the highest salaries of about fifty percent, compared to freelance consultants (less than 10 percent) and private companies (less than 20 percent). On the other hand, the proportion of people earning twenty-five thousand dollars to almost fifty thousand dollars in private companies are twice as much as the government sector or free consultants.

In general, the higher salaries for each type of employment are supplied, the more Anthropology graduates work there.

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