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Would it be possible for you to check Wordsworth's Daffodils and My alluring self?
Hello Anita

I started at the top of the board again and have only just reached Poetry. I have to disappear now, but tomorrow (when my synapses have repaired themselves) I'll start here first and read through everything!

See you,
MrP
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Thanks Mr.P. I can wait... till the 'morrow comes.
Your poem reminds me of a painting called 'Heracles at the Crossroads', but I can't remember who painted it. When I do, I'll post a link.

I'm at crossroads ] you would need to say 'the crossroads' here.

of my this life ] you can say 'of this my life', but (for some reason) not 'of my this life'!

one to the ugly death ] if it's a particular form of death, that's fine; but if it's death in general, you would just say 'to ugly death'.

which do I chose the best ] here you would need 'choose'

I can see why you call it Frostian, in the 'road less traveled' sense. The last two lines sound very like Frost – esp. 'That few would take to please'. It's an interesting phrase, because the grammar is unusual; but I think it works.

MrP
Thank you Mr. P. Here's the corrected version.

I'm at the crossroads
of this my life
one road to beauty
one to ugly death
one leads to immense happiness
one to the eternal myth
how do I travel now
which do I choose the best
a road of innumerable worries,
a road of eternal peace.
I stopped at the bend
I looked at the roads
I walked along the road
that few would take to please.
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Yes, that's it!

I like those last two lines. They would make a very good refrain, in an elaborate form.

MrP