Please find below the drafted salary increment letter. Kindly provide me feedback /comments to improve the letter.

With due respect I hereby request your kind consideration to provide a good increment in my salary and change my agreement granting yearly vacation.

I am working in this esteemed organization since 26 Jun 07 (more than 2½ years) and successfully completed my first contract of two years duration. Almost all engineers are having yearly vacation facility and I am also requesting the same yearly vacation facility which is very necessary for recreation purpose.

Presently I am working in Royal Commission Contract # 071-C13 as a QA/QC Electrical Engineer, performing all related duties up to the satisfaction of client and our senior engineers/Managers. Additionally, I am also involved in site activities supervising/monitoring installation of Panels in , GIS equipment & others, jointly with site Superintendent/Engineer. It gives me an immense pleasure to specify that the managers have shown faith in me and awarded these responsibilities considering my interest and capabilities.

I am working in this project right from beginning and gone through all different phases of project including Design, Procurement, Mobilization and Site Construction, contributing all my knowledge, efforts & hard work towards the progress of the project.

I request you to change my salary and grant me new salary of SR 6500/-. I am looking forward to continue working for the welfare of the organization and requesting your kind support & consideration. Hope you will take my request positively and grant me salary increment.

Expecting your early reply/acceptance.

Thank you for your supportive consideration.
Can some one send letter of salary incerment for my staff

Can some one send letter of salary incerment for my staff

To all staff members:

Starting tomorrow, you will all receive a 25% salary increment.

Yours sincerely,

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Kindly change the word "FAITH" to Confidence. Re-prhase the sentence..."working for the welfare". Instead, ..."for the accomplishment of our project"...

Emphasize the I, as you are the one requesting for incrrease/increment.

Omit the word supportive as you already used it in the previous paragraph.